Sonnet 136

The poet begs the Dark Lady to accept him as 'Will' and allow his name to suffice as his identity, reducing himself to his name alone.

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1 If thy soul check thee that I come so near,
The soul check
If your soul worries that I come so near,
2 Swear to thy blind soul that I was thy Will,
Swear I am thy Will
Assure your unconscious heart that I embody your desire,
3 And will thy soul knows is admitted there,
And your soul knows that will is admitted there,
4 Thus far for love, my love-suit sweet fulfil.
This far for love, my sweet suit fulfill.
5 Will will fulfil the treasure of thy love,
Will will fulfill the treasure of your love,
Wordplay: “Will will fulfil”

Name and verb collapse: Will (the poet) will (act to) fulfill. Identity and action merge syntactically.

6 Ay, fill it full with wills, and my will one,
Yes, fill it completely with wills, and my will one,
7 In things of great receipt with case we prove,
In things of great capacity, with ease we prove,
8 Among a number one is reckoned none.
Among a multitude, one goes unnoticed.
Volta The volta shifts from wordplay negotiation to the paradoxical logic of 'nothing'—one lost in a crowd becomes invisible, thus free.
9 Then in the number let me pass untold,
Then let me pass uncounted in the number,
10 Though in thy store’s account I one must be,
Though in your account I must still be one,
11 For nothing hold me, so it please thee hold,
Count me for nothing, as long as you hold me,
Wordplay: “nothing”

Paradoxically freeing: to be nothing is to be unaccountable, invisible, free from judgment.

12 That nothing me, a something sweet to thee.
Make nothing me into something sweet for you.
13 Make but my name thy love, and love that still,
Make just my name your love, and love that still,
14 And then thou lov’st me for my name is Will.
And then you'll love me because my name is Will.
The Blind Soul and Blind Love

The sonnet opens with a plea to swear before her 'blind soul' that the poet was her Will. Blindness is key: her soul cannot see, cannot judge. The poet asks to be accepted on faith, not evidence. This aligns with the Dark Lady sequence's meditation on love as willed self-deception. The poem acknowledges that his plea is false ('Swear to thy blind soul that I was') but asks her to accept the fiction anyway. Love, in this formulation, is collaborative illusion.

Receipt and Reckoning

Line 7's 'things of great receipt' suggests containers that hold vast quantities without overflow. The Dark Lady is a capacious vessel; the poet wants to be liquid poured into her. But paradoxically, line 9 argues that being one among thousands means being nothing at all—invisible, uncounted. This freedom through anonymity might be the poem's only comfort: if he doesn't matter, he's also free from the burden of mattering.

If this happened today

Like a crush asking you to forget everything about them except their name and role in your life. 'Just call me by my name and think of me as yours.' It's the reduction of personhood to a function in someone else's narrative.