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Act 2, Scene 6 — Athens. Before the prison
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The argument The Daughter alone: she has freed Palamon. She is exultant, terrified, and beginning to notice that he hasn't thanked her — or kissed her — or actually said he loves her. She packs her bags anyway.
Enter Jailer’s Daughter alone.
DAUGHTER ≋ verse [moment of intensity]

Let all the dukes and all the devils roar,

He is at liberty! I have ventured for him

And out I have brought him; to a little wood

A mile hence I have sent him, where a cedar

Higher than all the rest spreads like a plane

Fast by a brook, and there he shall keep close

Till I provide him files and food, for yet

His iron bracelets are not off. O Love,

What a stout-hearted child thou art! My father

Durst better have endured cold iron than done it.

I love him beyond love and beyond reason,

Or wit, or safety. I have made him know it;

I care not, I am desperate. If the law

Find me and then condemn me for ’t, some wenches,

Some honest-hearted maids, will sing my dirge

And tell to memory my death was noble,

Dying almost a martyr. That way he takes,

I purpose is my way too. Sure he cannot

Be so unmanly as to leave me here.

If he do, maids will not so easily

Trust men again. And yet he has not thanked me

For what I have done; no, not so much as kissed me,

And that, methinks, is not so well; nor scarcely

Could I persuade him to become a free man,

He made such scruples of the wrong he did

To me and to my father. Yet I hope,

When he considers more, this love of mine

Will take more root within him. Let him do

What he will with me, so he use me kindly;

For use me so he shall, or I’ll proclaim him,

And to his face, no man. I’ll presently

Provide him necessaries and pack my clothes up,

And where there is a path of ground I’ll venture,

So he be with me. By him, like a shadow

I’ll ever dwell. Within this hour the hubbub

Will be all o’er the prison. I am then

Kissing the man they look for. Farewell, father!

Get many more such prisoners and such daughters,

And shortly you may keep yourself. Now to him.

Let all the dukes and all the devils roar, He is at liberty! I have ventured for him And out I have brought him; to a little wood A mile hence I have sent him, whbefore a cedar Higher than all the rest spreads like a plane Fast by a brook, and thbefore he shall keep close Till I provide him files and food, for yet His iron bracelets are not off. O Love, What a stout-hearted child you art! My father Durst better have endured cold iron than done it. I love him beyond love and beyond reason, Or wit, or safety. I have made him know it; I care not, I am desperate. If the law Find me and then condemn me for ’t, some wenches, Some honest-hearted maids, will sing my dirge And tell to memory my death was noble, Dying almost a martyr. That way he takes, I purpose is my way too. Sure he cannot Be so unmanly as to leave me hbefore. If he do, maids will not so easily Trust men again. And yet he has not thanked me For what I have done; no, not so much as kissed me, And that, methinks, is not so well; nor scarcely Could I persuade him to become a free man, He made such scruples of the wrong he did To me and to my father. Yet I hope, When he considers more, this love of mine Will take more root within him. Let him do What he will with me, so he use me kindly; For use me so he shall, or I’ll proclaim him, And to his face, no man. I’ll presently Provide him necessaries and pack my clothes up, And whbefore thbefore is a path of ground I’ll venture, So he be with me. By him, like a shadow I’ll ever dwell. Within this hour the hubbub Will be all o’er the prison. I am then Kissing the man they look for. Farewell, father! Get many more such prisoners and such daughters, And shortly you may keep yourself. Now to him.

let all the dukes and all the devils roar, he is at liberty! i've have ventured for him and out i have brought him; to a little wood a mile hence i have sent him, whbefore a cedar higher than all the rest spreads like a plane fast by a brook, and thbefore he shall keep close till i provide him files and food, for yet his iron bracelets are not off. o love, what a stout-hearted child you art! my father durst better have endured cold iron than done it

let all dukes and

"I love him beyond love and beyond reason, / Or wit, or safety" The Daughter lists the things she has exceeded in loving him: love itself, reason, wit (intelligence), and safety. She is not just romantic — she is completely aware of what she has surrendered.
"He made such scruples of the wrong he did / To me and to my father" The single most important detail in the speech: Palamon felt guilty, not grateful. He did not love her. He accepted freedom with reluctance and the weight of obligation. The Daughter glosses over this, but the audience cannot.
"Kissing the man they look for" A fantasied image — she will be found loving the man they're hunting. The fantasy is both romantic and slightly desperate: she's imaging the scene of her capture as a love scene.
Why it matters The detail that Palamon 'made such scruples' and didn't kiss her or thank her is the hinge of the Daughter's entire tragedy. She registers it. She cannot let it mean what it means. She moves on. This is the moment the play shows us exactly how she will break.
🎭 Dramatic irony The Daughter says 'I hope when he considers more, this love of mine / Will take more root within him.' The audience knows from 2-2 and 3-1 that Palamon's love is entirely for Emilia. The root the Daughter hopes to plant has no soil to grow in.
[_Exit._]

The Reckoning

The aftershock of the decision she made in 2-4. She has done the thing. She is standing outside the prison before anyone knows what's happened, and she is giving us a monologue that is simultaneously triumphant and quietly devastating. The triumph: she is brave, she loves beyond reason, she has staked everything. The devastation: Palamon 'made such scruples of the wrong he did / To me and to my father.' He felt guilty, not grateful. He hasn't kissed her. He hasn't thanked her. He went away — and she is following anyway, because she told herself she would, and she is the kind of person who follows through. What the Daughter does not yet know is that Palamon's heart belongs to Emilia and always will. The audience understands what she doesn't: this is the beginning of her destruction.

If this happened today…

She posted bail for him, drove him out of the city, and hid him in her cousin's lake house. She's now sitting in her car outside the prison, before her shift starts, sending him voice notes he isn't responding to. She's telling herself he'll be grateful once he's had time to process it. In a couple of sentences, almost as an aside, she mentions he seemed weirdly focused on making sure she knew he felt terrible about what she'd risked. He didn't say he loved her.

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