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The argument Gratiano and Salarino wait for Lorenzo at Shylock's house; Jessica descends in boy's clothes with a casket of gold; she and Lorenzo leave together; Antonio arrives and cancels the masque — Bassanio is sailing tonight.
Enter the masquers, Gratiano and Salarino.
GRATIANO ≋ verse [matter-of-fact, waiting around]

This is the penthouse under which Lorenzo

Desired us to make stand.

This is the roofed structure under which Lorenzo asked us to wait.

This is the covered area where Lorenzo told us to stand.

this is where lorenzo said to wait

SALARINO [noting the delay]

His hour is almost past.

His appointed time is almost over.

He's running out of time.

time's almost up

GRATIANO ≋ verse [wry observation about lovers]

And it is marvel he out-dwells his hour,

For lovers ever run before the clock.

And it's surprising he hasn't arrived yet—lovers always show up before the scheduled time.

It's weird he hasn't shown up yet. Lovers are always early, not late.

it's weird he's late lovers are always early

SALARINO ≋ verse [musing on love's fickleness]

O ten times faster Venus’ pigeons fly

To seal love’s bonds new-made than they are wont

To keep obliged faith unforfeited!

Oh, Cupid's doves fly ten times faster to create new love promises than they fly to keep old commitments safe!

Cupid's doves fly way faster to make new love than to keep the old promises!

cupid's doves fly faster making new love than keeping old promises

GRATIANO ≋ verse [cynical riff on fading passion]

That ever holds: who riseth from a feast

With that keen appetite that he sits down?

Where is the horse that doth untread again

His tedious measures with the unbated fire

That he did pace them first? All things that are,

Are with more spirit chased than enjoy’d.

How like a younger or a prodigal

The scarfed bark puts from her native bay,

Hugg’d and embraced by the strumpet wind!

How like the prodigal doth she return

With over-weather’d ribs and ragged sails,

Lean, rent, and beggar’d by the strumpet wind!

That's always the case: who leaves a feast as hungry as when they sat down? What horse runs again with the same fire as it did the first time? Everything in life is pursued more eagerly than it's enjoyed. It's like a ship leaving her native bay, hugged by the wind, but when she returns, she comes back with broken ribs and tattered sails, worn and impoverished by the wind!

That's always true. Who leaves a party as hungry as they arrived? What horse runs the same way twice? Everything is chased harder than it's actually enjoyed. It's like a ship leaving its home port all excited, but when it comes back, it's broken, torn up, and ruined by the wind.

nobody leaves a feast as hungry as they came everything is chased more than enjoyed ships leave home excited but come back broken

"All things that are, / Are with more spirit chased than enjoy'd" One of the play's key philosophical statements — desire is more powerful than satisfaction. The pursuit of Portia, the bond's threat, the chase of revenge: all follow this pattern.
Enter Lorenzo.
SALARINO [cutting off, spotting Lorenzo]

Here comes Lorenzo, more of this hereafter.

Here comes Lorenzo. We can talk about this later.

Here he is. We'll talk about this later.

here's lorenzo we'll talk later

LORENZO ≋ verse [apologetic but eager to proceed]

Sweet friends, your patience for my long abode.

Not I but my affairs have made you wait.

When you shall please to play the thieves for wives,

I’ll watch as long for you then. Approach.

Here dwells my father Jew. Ho! who’s within?

Sweet friends, thank you for your patience while I've been away. It's not I who delayed, but my business. When you're ready to play the thieves and steal wives for yourselves, I'll wait for you just as long. Come, let's go. My father the Jew lives here. Hello? Is anyone home?

Thanks for waiting, friends. It's not me that's slow, it's just business. When you guys go steal yourselves some wives, I'll wait for you the same way. Come on, let's go. This is where the Jew lives. Hello? Anyone in there?

thanks for waiting when u steal ur wives i'll wait 4 u let's go any1 home?

Enter Jessica above, in boy’s clothes.
JESSICA ≋ verse [cautious, testing from the window]

Who are you? Tell me, for more certainty,

Albeit I’ll swear that I do know your tongue.

Who are you? Tell me for certain, even though I recognize your voice.

Identify yourself, I know your voice but need to be sure.

who r u? i know ur voice tho

LORENZO [tender reassurance]

Lorenzo, and thy love.

It's Lorenzo, and someone who loves you.

It's Lorenzo, your lover.

it's lorenzo and ur love

JESSICA ≋ verse [playfully affirming her love]

Lorenzo certain, and my love indeed,

For who love I so much? And now who knows

But you, Lorenzo, whether I am yours?

You're certainly Lorenzo, and my love indeed. Who do I love so much if not you? And only you know, Lorenzo, whether I truly belong to you.

Yes, you're Lorenzo, and my love for sure. Who else would I love? Only you know if I'm really yours.

yes it's u i love u most only u know if i'm urs

LORENZO [solemn vow of love]

Heaven and thy thoughts are witness that thou art.

Heaven and your own heart are proof that you're mine.

Heaven and what you feel know that you're mine.

heaven and ur heart know ur mine

JESSICA ≋ verse [embarrassed by her boy's disguise]

Here, catch this casket; it is worth the pains.

I am glad ’tis night, you do not look on me,

For I am much asham’d of my exchange.

But love is blind, and lovers cannot see

The pretty follies that themselves commit,

For if they could, Cupid himself would blush

To see me thus transformed to a boy.

Here, catch this casket—it's worth the effort. I'm glad it's night so you can't see me, because I'm so ashamed of my change in appearance. But love is blind, and lovers can't see the foolish things they do. If they could, even Cupid himself would blush to see me transformed into a boy like this.

Here, grab this box—it's got good stuff in it. I'm glad it's dark because I'm really embarrassed about how I look dressed as a boy. But love makes you blind, and you can't see how ridiculous this is. If you could, Cupid would blush too.

catch this casket i'm glad it's dark i'm embarrassed dressed as a boy but love is blind

LORENZO [urging her down, impatient]

Descend, for you must be my torch-bearer.

Come down, because you need to carry the torch for me.

Come down. You need to carry the torch.

come down u need to carry the torch

JESSICA ≋ verse [self-conscious about being seen]

What! must I hold a candle to my shames?

They in themselves, good sooth, are too too light.

Why, ’tis an office of discovery, love,

And I should be obscur’d.

What! Do I have to light up my shame? My shameful appearance is already too visible anyway. Carrying a torch is a job that exposes you, and I should be hidden.

No! Do I have to shine a light on how embarrassed I am? Everyone can already see me too much. Carrying a torch just shows me off, and I want to be hidden.

do i have to light up my shame? it's already too visible torches expose u

"They in themselves, good sooth, are too too light" 'Light' means both illuminated (she doesn't need more light shone on her misdeeds) and morally lightweight/immodest. Jessica plays on both senses — her shame is already too exposed AND her actions already immodest.
LORENZO ≋ verse [reassuring her, urging haste]

So are you, sweet,

Even in the lovely garnish of a boy.

But come at once,

For the close night doth play the runaway,

And we are stay’d for at Bassanio’s feast.

You're beautiful even dressed as a boy. But come now, because the night is passing, and we're expected at Bassanio's party.

You look beautiful dressed like that. But come on, we need to go. Night is disappearing, and they're waiting for us at Bassanio's.

u look beautiful even as a boy but let's go night is passing they're waiting for us

JESSICA ≋ verse [hurried, gathering more gold]

I will make fast the doors, and gild myself

With some moe ducats, and be with you straight.

I'll lock the doors and grab some more gold coins, and then I'll be right with you.

I'm going to lock up and grab some more money, then I'm out of here.

locking the doors grabbing more money be right there

🎭 Dramatic irony Jessica goes back to 'grab more ducats' — money that belonged to Shylock, being stolen from a house Shylock believes is securely locked. The audience knows what Shylock does not: his 'fast find' will find nothing.
[_Exit above._]
GRATIANO [approving, punning on 'gentile']

Now, by my hood, a gentle, and no Jew.

By my oath, she's gentle and noble, truly not like a Jew.

My oath, she's so kind and gentle.

she's a true gentle

"a gentle, and no Jew" Gratiano means 'gentle' as in gentile — Christian — and also as in gentle in character. But the compliment requires a negation ('no Jew') that reveals exactly how the surrounding world sees Jessica's transition.
LORENZO ≋ verse [sincere admiration for Jessica]

Beshrew me but I love her heartily,

For she is wise, if I can judge of her,

And fair she is, if that mine eyes be true,

And true she is, as she hath prov’d herself.

And therefore, like herself, wise, fair, and true,

Shall she be placed in my constant soul.

I swear I love her deeply, because she's wise, if I judge correctly, and beautiful, if my eyes are true, and faithful, as she has proven herself. Therefore, with her wisdom, beauty, and loyalty, she will hold a permanent place in my devoted heart.

I really do love her. She's smart, she's beautiful, and she's proven she's faithful. So I'm going to keep her wisdom, beauty, and loyalty in my heart forever.

i love her she's wise beautiful and true i'll keep her in my heart forever

Enter Jessica.
LORENZO ≋ verse [eager to depart with her]

What, art thou come? On, gentlemen, away!

Our masquing mates by this time for us stay.

So you've arrived? Come on, gentlemen, let's go! Our masked party friends are waiting for us by now.

You're here! Let's go, everyone. Our party friends are waiting for us.

ur here letsgo guys party friends waiting

[_Exit with Jessica and Salarino._]
Enter Antonio.
ANTONIO [alert, calling out in the dark]

Who’s there?

Who’s there?

Who’s there?

Who’s there

GRATIANO [surprised recognition]

Signior Antonio!

Signior Antonio!

Signior Antonio!

Signior Antonio

ANTONIO ≋ verse [urgent, hurrying them along]

Fie, fie, Gratiano! where are all the rest?

’Tis nine o’clock, our friends all stay for you.

No masque tonight, the wind is come about;

Bassanio presently will go aboard.

I have sent twenty out to seek for you.

Stop it, Gratiano! Where is everyone else? It's nine o'clock, and all our friends are waiting for you. There's no masquerade tonight—the wind has changed direction. Bassanio is about to board his ship right now. I've sent twenty people out looking for you.

Come on, Gratiano! Where are all the others? It's nine o'clock and everyone's waiting for you. There's no masquerade tonight because the wind changed. Bassanio's about to sail. I've sent out twenty people searching for you.

where is everyone it's 9pm no masquerade wind changed bassanio's boarding now i sent 20 ppl looking 4 u

GRATIANO ≋ verse [relieved and eager to sail]

I am glad on’t. I desire no more delight

Than to be under sail and gone tonight.

I'm glad to hear it. I want nothing more than to set sail and leave tonight.

Good! That's perfect. I just want to get on that ship and go.

great i'm happy i just wanna sail tonight

[_Exeunt._]

The Reckoning

The elopement scene plays as romantic comedy but carries a dark underside: Jessica steals from her father, disguises herself, and descends from the window of a house she is abandoning. Gratiano's cheerful 'a gentle, and no Jew' is meant warmly but says something cruel. And the scene ends with Antonio arriving to say all plans are off — the masque is cancelled, the wind has changed, Bassanio is leaving tonight. Everything accelerates.

If this happened today…

A woman in her twenties climbs down the fire escape of her family home while her dad is at a dinner he was manipulated into attending. She's wearing her brother's hoodie and carrying her dad's savings in a duffle bag. Her boyfriend is waiting below with his crew. She's beautiful and ashamed of it. He calls up: it's me, are you there? She whispers: I know your voice. He says: come down. She says: I'm embarrassed by what I'm doing. He says: you're covered, it's dark. Then she says: let me grab more money and I'll be right there.

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