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Act 4, Scene 7 — Before York
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The argument Edward returns from Burgundy, talks his way through the gates of York by claiming only his dukedom, then is persuaded by Montgomery to proclaim himself King.
Flourish. Enter King Edward, Richard (Duke of Gloucester), Hastings and
Soldiers.
KING EDWARD ≋ verse resolute

Now, brother Richard, Lord Hastings, and the rest,

Yet thus far Fortune maketh us amends,

And says that once more I shall interchange

My waned state for Henry’s regal crown.

Well have we passed and now repassed the seas,

And brought desired help from Burgundy.

What then remains, we being thus arrived

From Ravenspurgh haven before the gates of York,

But that we enter as into our dukedom?

Now, brother Richard, Lord Hastings, and the rest, Yet thus far Fortune maketh us amends, And says that once more I shall interchange My waned state for Henry’s regal crown. Well have we passed and now repassed the seas, And brought desired help from Burgundy. What then remains, we being thus arrived From Ravenspurgh haven before the gates of York, But that we enter as into our dukedom?

Now, brother Richard, Lord Hastings, and the rest, Yet thus far Fortune maketh us amends, And says that once more I shall interchange My waned state for Henry’s regal crown. Well have we passed and now repassed the seas, And brought desired help from Burgundy. What then remains, we being thus arrived From Ravenspurgh haven before the gates of York, But that we enter as into our dukedom?

war blood death everything is chaos

RICHARD ≋ verse worried, anxious

The gates made fast! Brother, I like not this;

For many men that stumble at the threshold

Are well foretold that danger lurks within.

The gates made fast! Brother, I like not this; For many men that stumble at the threshold Are well foretold that danger lurks within.

The gates made fast! Brother, I like not this; For many men that stumble at the threshold Are well foretold that danger lurks within.

yeah brutal

KING EDWARD ≋ verse resolute

Tush, man, abodements must not now affright us.

By fair or foul means we must enter in,

For hither will our friends repair to us.

Tush, man, abodements must not now affright us. By fair or foul means we must enter in, For hither will our friends repair to us.

Tush, man, abodements must not now affright us. By fair or foul means we must enter in, For hither will our friends repair to us.

yeah brutal

HASTINGS resolute

My liege, I’ll knock once more to summon them.

My liege, I’ll knock once more to summon them.

My liege, I’ll knock once more to summon them.

hm

Enter on the walls, the Mayor of York and his Brethren.
First appearance
MAYOR

The Mayor speaks in the cautious, procedurally-minded register of a local official caught between great powers — a man whose instinct is always to find the path of least liability.

MAYOR ≋ verse resolute

My lords, we were forewarned of your coming

And shut the gates for safety of ourselves,

For now we owe allegiance unto Henry.

My lords, we were forewarned of your coming And shut the gates for safety of ourselves, For now we owe allegiance unto Henry.

My lords, we were forewarned of your coming And shut the gates for safety of ourselves, For now we owe allegiance unto Henry.

yeah brutal

KING EDWARD ≋ verse resolute

But, master Mayor, if Henry be your king,

Yet Edward, at the least, is Duke of York.

But, master Mayor, if Henry be your king, Yet Edward, at the least, is Duke of York.

But, master Mayor, if Henry be your king, Yet Edward, at the least, is Duke of York.

hm

MAYOR resolute

True, my good lord, I know you for no less.

True, my good lord, I know you for no less.

True, my good lord, I know you for no less.

hm

KING EDWARD ≋ verse resolute

Why, and I challenge nothing but my dukedom,

As being well content with that alone.

Why, and I challenge nothing but my dukedom, As being well content with that alone.

Why, and I challenge nothing but my dukedom, As being well content with that alone.

hm

🎭 Dramatic irony Edward's claim to be 'content with that alone' — the dukedom — is understood by both Richard (in his aside) and the audience to be transparently false. The Mayor believes it because he wants to.
[_Aside_.] But when the fox hath once got in his nose,
RICHARD resolute

He’ll soon find means to make the body follow.

He’ll soon find means to make the body follow.

He’ll soon find means to make the body follow.

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HASTINGS ≋ verse resolute

Why, master Mayor, why stand you in a doubt?

Open the gates; we are King Henry’s friends.

Why, master Mayor, why stand you in a doubt? Open the gates; we are King Henry’s friends.

Why, master Mayor, why stand you in a doubt? Open the gates; we are King Henry’s friends.

hm

MAYOR resolute

Ay, say you so? The gates shall then be opened.

Ay, say you so? The gates shall then be opened.

Ay, say you so? The gates shall then be opened.

hm

[_He descends._]
RICHARD resolute

A wise, stout captain, and soon persuaded.

A wise, stout captain, and soon persuaded.

A wise, stout captain, and soon persuaded.

hm

HASTINGS ≋ verse resolute

The good old man would fain that all were well,

So ’twere not long of him; but, being entered,

I doubt not, I, but we shall soon persuade

Both him and all his brothers unto reason.

The good old man would fain that all were well, So ’twere not long of him; but, being entered, I doubt not, I, but we shall soon persuade Both him and all his brothers unto reason.

The good old man would fain that all were well, So ’twere not long of him; but, being entered, I doubt not, I, but we shall soon persuade Both him and all his brothers unto reason.

yeah brutal

Enter the Mayor and two Aldermen below.
KING EDWARD ≋ verse worried, anxious

So, master Mayor, these gates must not be shut

But in the night or in the time of war.

What, fear not, man, but yield me up the keys;

So, master Mayor, these gates must not be shut But in the night or in the time of war. What, fear not, man, but yield me up the keys;

So, master Mayor, these gates must not be shut But in the night or in the time of war. What, fear not, man, but yield me up the keys;

yeah brutal

[_Takes his keys._]
For Edward will defend the town and thee
And all those friends that deign to follow me.
March. Enter Montgomery with drum and Soldiers.
RICHARD ≋ verse resolute

Brother, this is Sir John Montgomery,

Our trusty friend unless I be deceived.

Brother, this is Sir John Montgomery, Our trusty friend unless I be deceived.

Brother, this is Sir John Montgomery, Our trusty friend unless I be deceived.

hm

KING EDWARD resolute

Welcome, Sir John! But why come you in arms?

Welcome, Sir John! But why come you in arms?

Welcome, Sir John! But why come you in arms?

hm

First appearance
MONTGOMERY

Montgomery speaks in impatient, unambiguous ultimatums — he has no time for diplomatic hedging and no patience for men who won't own what they want. Watch for how his bluntness actually pushes Edward into bolder choices.

MONTGOMERY ≋ verse dutiful, committed

To help King Edward in his time of storm,

As every loyal subject ought to do.

To help King Edward in his time of storm, As every loyal subject ought to do.

To help King Edward in his time of storm, As every loyal subject ought to do.

hm

KING EDWARD ≋ verse resolute

Thanks, good Montgomery; but we now forget

Our title to the crown, and only claim

Our dukedom till God please to send the rest.

Thanks, good Montgomery; but we now forget Our title to the crown, and only claim Our dukedom till God please to send the rest.

Thanks, good Montgomery; but we now forget Our title to the crown, and only claim Our dukedom till God please to send the rest.

yeah brutal

MONTGOMERY ≋ verse dutiful, committed

Then fare you well, for I will hence again.

I came to serve a king, and not a duke.

Then fare you well, for I will hence again. I came to serve a king, and not a duke.

Then fare you well, for I will hence again. I came to serve a king, and not a duke.

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Drummer, strike up, and let us march away.
[_The drum begins to march._]
KING EDWARD ≋ verse resolute

Nay, stay, Sir John, a while, and we’ll debate

By what safe means the crown may be recovered.

no, stay, Sir John, a while, and we’ll debate By what safe means the crown may be recovered.

no, stay, Sir John, a while, and we’ll debate By what safe means the crown may be recovered.

hm

MONTGOMERY ≋ verse resolute

What talk you of debating? In few words,

If you’ll not here proclaim yourself our king,

I’ll leave you to your fortune and be gone

To keep them back that come to succour you.

Why shall we fight if you pretend no title?

What talk you of debating? In few words, If you’ll not here proclaim yourself our king, I’ll leave you to your fortune and be gone To keep them back that come to succour you. Why shall we fight if you pretend no title?

What talk you of debating? In few words, If you’ll not here proclaim yourself our king, I’ll leave you to your fortune and be gone To keep them back that come to succour you. Why shall we fight if you pretend no title?

war blood death everything is chaos

RICHARD resolute

Why, brother, wherefore stand you on nice points?

Why, brother, wherefore stand you on nice points?

Why, brother, wherefore stand you on nice points?

hm

KING EDWARD ≋ verse resolute

When we grow stronger, then we’ll make our claim.

Till then ’tis wisdom to conceal our meaning.

When we grow stronger, then we’ll make our claim. Till then ’tis wisdom to conceal our meaning.

When we grow stronger, then we’ll make our claim. Till then ’tis wisdom to conceal our meaning.

hm

HASTINGS frustrated, angry

Away with scrupulous wit! Now arms must rule.

Away with scrupulous wit! Now arms must rule.

Away with scrupulous wit! Now arms must rule.

hm

RICHARD ≋ verse worried, anxious

And fearless minds climb soonest unto crowns.

Brother, we will proclaim you out of hand;

The bruit thereof will bring you many friends.

And fearless minds climb soonest unto crowns. Brother, we will proclaim you out of hand; The bruit thereof will bring you many friends.

And fearless minds climb soonest unto crowns. Brother, we will proclaim you out of hand; The bruit thereof will bring you many friends.

yeah brutal

KING EDWARD ≋ verse resolute

Then be it as you will; for ’tis my right,

And Henry but usurps the diadem.

Then be it as you will; for ’tis my right, And Henry but usurps the crown.

Then be it as you will; for ’tis my right, And Henry but usurps the crown.

hm

MONTGOMERY ≋ verse resolute

Ay, now my sovereign speaketh like himself,

And now will I be Edward’s champion.

Ay, now my sovereign speaketh like himself, And now will I be Edward’s champion.

Ay, now my sovereign speaketh like himself, And now will I be Edward’s champion.

hm

Sound, trumpet; Edward shall be here proclaimed.
HASTINGS resolute

Come, fellow soldier, make thou proclamation.

Come, fellow soldier, make you proclamation.

Come, fellow soldier, make you proclamation.

hm

[_Gives him a paper. Flourish._]
[_Reads_.] _Edward the Fourth, by the Grace of God, King of England and
SOLDIER resolute

France, and Lord of Ireland, etc._

France, and Lord of Ireland, etc._

France, and Lord of Ireland, etc._

hm

MONTGOMERY ≋ verse resolute

And whoso’er gainsays King Edward’s right,

By this I challenge him to single fight.

And whoso’er gainsays King Edward’s right, By this I challenge him to single fight.

And whoso’er gainsays King Edward’s right, By this I challenge him to single fight.

hm

[_Throws down his gauntlet._]
ALL resolute

Long live Edward the Fourth!

Long live Edward the Fourth!

Long live Edward the Fourth!

hm

KING EDWARD ≋ verse dutiful, committed

Thanks, brave Montgomery, and thanks unto you all.

If Fortune serve me, I’ll requite this kindness.

Now for this night let’s harbour here in York,

And when the morning sun shall raise his car

Above the border of this horizon

We’ll forward towards Warwick and his mates;

For well I wot that Henry is no soldier.

Ah, froward Clarence, how evil it beseems thee

To flatter Henry and forsake thy brother!

Yet, as we may, we’ll meet both thee and Warwick.

Come on, brave soldiers; doubt not of the day,

And, that once gotten, doubt not of large pay.

Thanks, brave Montgomery, and thanks unto you all. If Fortune serve me, I’ll requite this kindness. Now for this night let’s harbour here in York, And when the morning sun shall raise his car Above the border of this horizon We’ll forward towards Warwick and his mates; For well I wot that Henry is no soldier. Ah, froward Clarence, how evil it beseems you To flatter Henry and forsake your brother! Yet, as we may, we’ll meet both you and Warwick. Come on, brave soldiers; doubt not of the day, And, that once gotten, doubt not of large pay.

Thanks, brave Montgomery, and thanks unto you all. If Fortune serve me, I’ll requite this kindness. Now for this night let’s harbour here in York, And when the morning sun shall raise his car Above the border of this horizon We’ll forward towards Warwick and his mates; For well I wot that Henry is no soldier. Ah, froward Clarence, how evil it beseems you To flatter Henry and forsake your brother! Yet, as we may, we’ll meet both you and Warwick. Come on, brave soldiers; doubt not of the day, And, that once gotten, doubt not of large pay.

how did that even happen

[_Exeunt._]

The Reckoning

Edward is back, and he's doing what he does best: improvising with charm and then letting bolder men push him into decisiveness. The exchange with the Mayor of York is a masterclass in political incrementalism — say one thing, mean another, get your foot in the door. Richard's aside about the fox getting his nose in is the most honest line in the scene. The proclamation at the end, with Montgomery throwing down his gauntlet, shifts everything back toward war.

If this happened today…

A fired CEO returns from a trip to a friendly investor in Germany and shows up at the company's regional office, claiming he's just there to visit as the founding stockholder — not as CEO, definitely not. The office manager is nervous but lets him in. In the parking lot, his most loyal VP is already waiting with the marketing team to do a press release calling him CEO again. He's reluctant — 'let's be cautious' — but the VP says: 'If you don't say you're CEO right now I'm going back to my old job.' He says it.

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