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Act 4, Scene 4 — Alexandria. A Room in the Palace.
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The argument Antony dresses for battle, with Cleopatra helping buckle his armor — a domestic scene of tenderness before a war — then he departs to his soldiers with a warrior's kiss.
Enter Antony and Cleopatra with others.
ANTONY [eager, bracing for battle]

Eros! Mine armour, Eros!

Eros! My armor, Eros!

Eros! Get my armor, Eros!

eros! armor! eros!

CLEOPATRA [tenderly urging rest]

Sleep a little.

Sleep a little.

Sleep a little.

sleep a little.

ANTONY [affectionately brushing off her worry]

No, my chuck.—Eros! Come, mine armour, Eros!

No, my dear.—Eros! Come, my armor, Eros!

No way, sweetheart.—Eros! Bring my armor, Eros!

nope babe eros armor! eros!

Enter Eros with armour.
ANTONY ≋ verse [steeling himself with grim resolve]

Come, good fellow, put thine iron on.

If fortune be not ours today, it is

Because we brave her. Come.

Come, good fellow, put your armor on. If luck isn't ours today, it's because we're challenging fate. Come on.

Come on, buddy, get your armor on. If we don't win today, it's because we're up against the odds. Let's go.

come get your armor on. if we lose it's because we took on fate

CLEOPATRA ≋ verse [eager to help, a little unsure]

Nay, I’ll help too.

What’s this for?

No, I'll help too. What is this piece for?

I'm helping too. What's this piece supposed to be?

i'm helping what's this for?

ANTONY ≋ verse [fondly amused at her fumbling]

Ah, let be, let be! Thou art

The armourer of my heart. False, false. This, this!

Oh, stop, stop! You are The armor of my heart. Wrong, wrong. This one, this one!

Ah, never mind, never mind! You're The protection of my heart. No, not like that! This way, this way!

no no! u armor my heart wrong wrong this one this!

CLEOPATRA [playfully insistent]

Sooth, la, I’ll help. Thus it must be.

Truly, I'll help. That's how it must go.

Yes, I'll help. It has to fit like this.

ok i'll help this is how

ANTONY ≋ verse [warmly confident]

Well, well,

We shall thrive now. Seest thou, my good fellow?

Go put on thy defences.

Good, good, We'll succeed now. Do you see, my good fellow? Go put on your armor.

Alright, alright, We're going to do well now. You see, my friend? Go get your own armor on.

good good we'll win now go armor up

EROS [dutifully brisk]

Briefly, sir.

Briefly, sir.

Briefly, sir.

briefly, sir.

CLEOPATRA [proud of her small task]

Is not this buckled well?

Isn't this fastened well?

Is this buckled right?

good buckle?

ANTONY ≋ verse [tender pride mixed with bravado]

Rarely, rarely.

He that unbuckles this, till we do please

To daff’t for our repose, shall hear a storm.

Thou fumblest, Eros, and my queen’s a squire

More tight at this than thou. Dispatch. O love,

That thou couldst see my wars today, and knew’st

The royal occupation, thou shouldst see

A workman in’t.

Perfectly, perfectly. Anyone who unbuckles this before we choose To unfasten it for rest will face my wrath. You're fumbling, Eros, and my queen acts as a squire More skillfully at this than you. Hurry. Oh my love, If only you could see my wars today and understood What it means to be royal in battle, you would see A true craftsman.

Perfect, just perfect. Whoever undoes this before I'm ready to rest Will regret it. You're clumsy, Eros, and my queen Is better at this than you are. Move faster. Oh my dear, If you could watch me fight today and knew How a king goes to war, you'd see I really know what I'm doing.

perfect perfect don't unbuckle til i say or face my anger eros you're clumsy queen's better than u hurry up if u saw me fight u'd see i'm skilled

Enter an Officer, armed.
ANTONY ≋ verse [briskly welcoming, eager for battle]

Good morrow to thee. Welcome.

Thou look’st like him that knows a warlike charge.

To business that we love we rise betime

And go to’t with delight.

Good morning to you. Welcome. You look like someone who knows how to wage war. When it comes to work we love, we wake early and do it with delight.

Good morning. Welcome. You look like you know how to fight. When it's work you love, you get up early and dive in with joy.

you look like a warrior. when you love your work you wake up early & do it w joy

OFFICER ≋ verse [reporting readiness with pride]

A thousand, sir,

Early though’t be, have on their riveted trim

And at the port expect you.

A thousand soldiers, sir, Although it's early, have their armor fastened And wait for you at the harbor.

A thousand troops, sir, Even though it's early, are already fully armored And they're waiting for you at the port.

thousand soldiers sir armored up early waiting at the port

[_Shout. Trumpets flourish._]
Enter other Captains and Soldiers.
CAPTAIN [cheerful morning greeting]

The morn is fair. Good morrow, general.

The morning is beautiful. Good morning, general.

It's a beautiful morning. Good morning, general.

nice morning good morrow general

ALL [enthusiastic chorus greeting]

Good morrow, general.

Good morning, general.

Morning, general.

mornin general

ANTONY ≋ verse [tender farewell before battle]

’Tis well blown, lads.

This morning, like the spirit of a youth

That means to be of note, begins betimes.

So, so. Come, give me that. This way. Well said.

Fare thee well, dame.

Whate’er becomes of me,

This is a soldier’s kiss. [_Kisses her._] Rebukeable

And worthy shameful check it were, to stand

On more mechanic compliment. I’ll leave thee

Now like a man of steel.—You that will fight,

Follow me close, I’ll bring you to’t. Adieu.

It's a good morning, soldiers. This morning, like the spirit of a young person Who means to achieve fame, begins early. There. Come, give me that. This way. Well done. Farewell, lady. No matter what happens to me, This is a soldier's kiss. Showing more emotion Would be shameful and worthy of reproach. I'll leave you Now like a man of steel.—All of you who will fight, Follow close behind me, I'll lead you to the battle. Goodbye.

Good morning, soldiers. This morning, like someone young Who's going to make a name for himself, is starting early. There. Give me that. This way. Good work. Goodbye, my lady. Whatever happens, This is how a soldier says goodbye. More sentiment Would be pathetic and wrong. I'm leaving you Now acting like steel.—You who are going to fight, Follow right behind me, and I'll get you to the battle. Goodbye.

good morning soldiers like a young person who'll be famous this starts early farewell lady no matter what soldier's kiss only no more sentiment leaving like steel follow me to battle

[_Exeunt Antony, Eros, Captains and Soldiers._]
CHARMIAN [gently urging her inside]

Please you, retire to your chamber.

I ask you to go to your chamber.

Please go back to your room.

go to ur room

CLEOPATRA ≋ verse [wistfully admiring him departing]

Lead me.

He goes forth gallantly. That he and Caesar might

Determine this great war in single fight!

Then Antony—but now—. Well, on.

Lead me. He goes forth bravely. If only he and Caesar could Resolve this great war in a one-on-one fight! Then Antony would—but not now—. Well, let's go.

Lead me. He's going out so courageously. I wish he and Caesar could Just settle this whole war in a duel! Then Antony would—but not now—. Well, let's go.

lead me he goes so bravely wish he & caesar could fight one on one then antony... but not now let's go

Why it matters Cleopatra can't finish the sentence — 'Then Antony — but now —' collapses into silence. The sentence she can't complete may be the most honest thing she says in the play.
[_Exeunt._]

The Reckoning

One of the most quietly beautiful scenes in the play. The soldier getting dressed, his lover fumbling with his armor, the tenderness of a morning ritual before something terrible. Antony is entirely himself — good-humored, vain about his fighting, affectionate. And when he goes, Cleopatra watches him walk away and says: 'He goes forth gallantly.' The subjunctive 'but now' suggests she already knows something. She can't finish the thought.

If this happened today…

A firefighter's partner helps them put on their gear in the morning before a difficult call. There's a joke about fumbling the clasps. A kiss — 'this is a soldier's kiss, not a lover's ceremony.' They go. The partner watches them go and says to the dog: 'He goes out like that. If only it were just the two of them...' Then, quietly: 'Well. On we go.'

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