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The argument Clarence, imprisoned in the Tower, tells his keeper about a terrifying dream in which he drowned, descended to the underworld, and was condemned by the ghosts of those he betrayed. He falls back asleep. Two murderers arrive with a warrant from Richard; Brakenbury hands over custody and leaves. The murderers debate conscience in a grotesque comic routine before waking Clarence. He pleads for his life with desperate eloquence, invoking God's law, brotherhood, and mercy — not knowing that the brother he keeps naming as his protector is the man who ordered his death. The First Murderer stabs him and drags him to a barrel of malmsey wine to drown. The Second Murderer, stricken with remorse, refuses his reward and flees.
Enter Clarence and Keeper.
KEEPER gentle concern for a troubled friend

Why looks your Grace so heavily today?

Why do you look so sad today?

What's got you looking so down?

hey, what's wrong? looking rough this morning

CLARENCE ≋ verse traumatized, desperate to escape the memory

O, I have passed a miserable night,

So full of fearful dreams, of ugly sights,

That, as I am a Christian faithful man,

I would not spend another such a night

Though ’twere to buy a world of happy days,

So full of dismal terror was the time!

I had the most miserable night, so filled with terrifying dreams and horrible visions that—as God is my witness—I would never want to experience another night like it, not even if it cost me all the happiness in the world. The terror was absolute.

I just had the worst night of my life, man. Bad dreams, nasty stuff I never want to see again. Honestly? I'd give up years of good days to never live through another night like that. It was just pure horror.

worst night ever terrified out of my mind can't unsee that shit

KEEPER compassionate curiosity

What was your dream, my lord? I pray you tell me.

Tell me about the dream, please.

What was it about? Tell me.

tell me what happened

CLARENCE ≋ verse reliving the nightmare, lost in horror

Methoughts that I had broken from the Tower,

And was embarked to cross to Burgundy;

And in my company my brother Gloucester,

Who from my cabin tempted me to walk

Upon the hatches. Thence we looked toward England,

And cited up a thousand heavy times,

During the wars of York and Lancaster,

That had befall’n us. As we paced along

Upon the giddy footing of the hatches,

Methought that Gloucester stumbled, and in falling,

Struck me, that thought to stay him, overboard

Into the tumbling billows of the main.

O Lord, methought what pain it was to drown,

What dreadful noise of waters in my ears;

What sights of ugly death within my eyes.

Methoughts I saw a thousand fearful wracks;

A thousand men that fishes gnawed upon;

Wedges of gold, great anchors, heaps of pearl,

Inestimable stones, unvalued jewels,

All scattered in the bottom of the sea.

Some lay in dead men’s skulls, and in the holes

Where eyes did once inhabit there were crept—

As ’twere in scorn of eyes—reflecting gems,

That wooed the slimy bottom of the deep,

And mocked the dead bones that lay scattered by.

I dreamed I had escaped from the Tower and was aboard a ship bound for Burgundy. My brother Gloucester was with me. He urged me to walk out on the deck with him, and as we stood there, looking back toward England and remembering all the terrible battles of the wars between York and Lancaster, Gloucester stumbled and fell. I tried to catch him, but the push threw me overboard into the raging sea. God, the pain of drowning—the terrible sound of the water roaring in my ears, the horrible sight of death all around me. I saw thousands of wrecks at the bottom of the ocean, thousands of drowned bodies picked clean by fish, treasure scattered everywhere—gold, pearls, jewels of unimaginable value—all lying in the skulls of dead men, and where their eyes used to be, jewels had grown, shiny stones mocking the dead bones scattered on the seafloor.

So I'm dreaming I broke out of the Tower, right? I'm on a ship heading to Burgundy, and Gloucester's with me. He wants to take a walk on deck, so we go out there and we're looking back at England, talking about all those crazy wars, and then he loses his footing and falls. I reach out to grab him but he knocks me overboard into this insane ocean. The drowning—oh man, the sound, the water in my ears, watching death all around me. Wrecks everywhere, bodies torn apart by fish, treasure scattered all over—gold, anchors, pearls, jewels you can't even put a price on. And here's the sick part: they're just lying in dead men's skulls, and where the eyes used to be, these glowing jewels are growing, mocking the dead bones.

I'm drowning flashes of dead bodies gold and jewels scattered in the eyes of corpses water everywhere

KEEPER ≋ verse amazed at the detail

Had you such leisure in the time of death

To gaze upon these secrets of the deep?

How could you observe all this while you were dying?

Wait, you're telling me you were drowning and you still saw all that?

how were you noticing details while dying

CLARENCE ≋ verse suffocating, helpless, unable to die

Methought I had; and often did I strive

To yield the ghost, but still the envious flood

Stopped in my soul, and would not let it forth

To find the empty, vast, and wand’ring air,

But smothered it within my panting bulk,

Who almost burst to belch it in the sea.

I did. And I kept trying to give up, to let my soul escape, but the cruel ocean wouldn't let it go. It suffocated my soul, kept it locked inside my body, and I was choking, gasping, nearly bursting just trying to expel it into the sea.

Yeah, I could see it all. And I kept trying to just let go, you know? Let my soul get out of there. But the water wouldn't allow it. It choked it off, trapped it inside me, and I'm there suffocating, my whole body about to explode trying to get it out.

couldn't die soul trapped choked, suffocating body bursting

KEEPER alarmed

Awaked you not in this sore agony?

Didn't you wake up from that agony?

Jesus, didn't you wake up?

didn't you wake from that

CLARENCE ≋ verse damned, tortured by guilt and supernatural vengeance

No, no, my dream was lengthened after life.

O, then began the tempest to my soul.

I passed, methought, the melancholy flood,

With that sour ferryman which poets write of,

Unto the kingdom of perpetual night.

The first that there did greet my stranger-soul

Was my great father-in-law, renowned Warwick,

Who spake aloud, “What scourge for perjury

Can this dark monarchy afford false Clarence?”

And so he vanished. Then came wand’ring by

A shadow like an angel, with bright hair

Dabbled in blood; and he shrieked out aloud

“Clarence is come—false, fleeting, perjured Clarence,

That stabbed me in the field by Tewksbury!

Seize on him, Furies! Take him unto torment!”

With that, methoughts, a legion of foul fiends

Environed me, and howled in mine ears

Such hideous cries that with the very noise

I trembling waked, and for a season after

Could not believe but that I was in hell,

Such terrible impression made my dream.

No. The nightmare just kept going after I 'died.' Then the real torment started. I crossed what I thought was the river of the dead—the one the old poets write about, with that bitter ferryman—and entered a kingdom of eternal darkness. The first ghost that appeared to me was Warwick, my great father-in-law, and he demanded: 'What punishment does this dark realm have for someone as false as Clarence?' And he vanished. Then came another figure like an angel, bright-haired but covered in blood. He shrieked at me: 'Clarence—you're here, you liar, you traitor. You stabbed me on the field at Tewksbury! Seize him, Furies! Torture him!' And then a whole army of demons surrounded me, howling so hideously that the noise itself woke me up screaming. Even after I woke up, I couldn't believe I was alive. I was sure I was still in hell.

No, that's the thing—the nightmare went on. Even after I drowned. Then comes the real horror. I'm crossing this river—you know, the one the poets talk about where dead people go—and I'm heading into this eternal dark kingdom. Warwick shows up—my wife's father—and he's asking like: 'What kind of hell-punishment is bad enough for a perjurer like you?' Then this other thing appears, looks like an angel but he's covered in blood, and he starts screaming: 'Clarence, you're a liar and a backstabber. You killed me at Tewksbury! Get him, demons! Torture him!' And I've got this whole mob of demons surrounding me, shrieking so loud the sound itself wakes me up. But for a second after I wake up, I'm still convinced I'm in hell. That's how real it felt.

woke up but still thinking I'm in hell warwick, ghosts, demons shrieking I can still hear them

KEEPER ≋ verse sympathetic, shaken

No marvel, lord, though it affrighted you;

I am afraid, methinks, to hear you tell it.

No wonder it terrified you; I'm frightened just listening to you describe it.

Yeah, I mean, of course that freaked you out. Honestly, just hearing you talk about it is scaring me.

that's insane even hearing it scares the hell out of me

CLARENCE ≋ verse confessing guilt, desperate for mercy for his family

Ah, Keeper, Keeper, I have done these things,

That now give evidence against my soul,

For Edward’s sake, and see how he requites me.

O God, if my deep prayers cannot appease Thee,

But Thou wilt be avenged on my misdeeds,

Yet execute Thy wrath in me alone;

O, spare my guiltless wife and my poor children!

Keeper, I prithee sit by me awhile.

My soul is heavy, and I fain would sleep.

Keeper, Keeper, I've done terrible things—things that my own conscience condemns me for. I did them for Edward's sake, and look how he repays me. God, if my prayers can't save me, if you're determined to punish my sins, then do it to me alone. Spare my innocent wife and my children. Please, sit with me for a while. My spirit is heavy and I want to sleep.

Look, I messed up. Badly. I did some awful things for Edward, and now look—he's letting this happen to me. If God's going to get revenge for that, fine, do it to me. But my wife didn't do anything. My kids didn't do anything. Please, just sit with me a minute, okay? I'm exhausted and I need to sleep.

I deserve this but not my family please stay with me I need to sleep

KEEPER kind, offering what comfort he can

I will, my lord; God give your Grace good rest.

I will, my lord. May God grant you peace.

Of course. Sleep well.

stay safe rest easy

[_Clarence reposes himself on a chair._]
Enter Brakenbury the Lieutenant.
BRAKENBURY ≋ verse philosophical resignation, seeing the weight of power

Sorrow breaks seasons and reposing hours,

Makes the night morning, and the noontide night.

Princes have but their titles for their glories,

An outward honour for an inward toil;

And, for unfelt imaginations,

They often feel a world of restless cares,

So that between their titles and low name,

There’s nothing differs but the outward fame.

Grief disrupts the normal order of time and sleep. For princes, every external honor hides internal exhaustion. They have titles but no peace. Between their grand names and the exhausted men who carry those names, the only real difference is what the public sees.

Sorrow messes with everything—night becomes day, day becomes night. You've got these princes with all these fancy titles, but really? They're just worn out. The only thing between the title and the misery is that people can't see the misery from the outside.

even kings can't sleep titles hide the pain public sees glory private world is hell

Enter the two Murderers.
FIRST MURDERER businesslike, efficient

Ho, who’s here?

Who's there?

Uh, hello?

yo who's that

BRAKENBURY professional, official

What wouldst thou, fellow? And how cam’st thou hither?

What do you want, fellow? How did you get here?

What do you need, and how'd you get in here?

who are you what do you want

SECOND MURDERER matter-of-fact

I would speak with Clarence, and I came hither on my legs.

I need to speak with Clarence. I got here on foot.

I want to talk to Clarence. I walked.

here to see clarence went through the door

BRAKENBURY bemused

What, so brief?

That's it?

That's all you've got to say?

that's really it

FIRST MURDERER impatient, commanding

’Tis better, sir, than to be tedious. Let him see our commission, and

talk no more.

Better to be brief than long-winded. Show him the warrant and be done talking.

Look, it's better to keep it short. Just show him the commission and stop wasting time.

stop talking show the warrant move on

[_Brakenbury reads the commission._]
BRAKENBURY ≋ verse washing his hands of responsibility, formal

I am in this commanded to deliver

The noble Duke of Clarence to your hands.

I will not reason what is meant hereby,

Because I will be guiltless of the meaning.

There lies the Duke asleep, and there the keys.

I’ll to the King and signify to him

That thus I have resigned to you my charge.

I've been ordered to hand over the Duke of Clarence to you. I'm not asking myself what this means, because that way I won't be responsible for the meaning. There he is asleep, and there are the keys. I'm going to tell the King that I've given you custody of him and I'm done.

Okay, I've got orders to give you the Duke of Clarence. I'm not going to ask what it means, so I don't have to be responsible for it. Look, he's asleep over there. Take the keys. I'm going to go tell the King I handed him over and I'm out of it.

i have orders i won't ask why not my responsibility take him i'm leaving

FIRST MURDERER approving, cynical

You may, sir; ’tis a point of wisdom. Fare you well.

Smart man. Goodbye.

Good call. See you.

smart move see you

[_Exeunt Brakenbury and the Keeper._]
SECOND MURDERER practical, curious

What, shall I stab him as he sleeps?

Should I stab him while he's sleeping?

So should I just stab him while he's out?

kill him while he's asleep

FIRST MURDERER dismissive, professional

No. He’ll say ’twas done cowardly, when he wakes.

No. He'll say we were cowards when he wakes up.

Nah. He'll think we're cowards when he wakes.

no he'd call us cowards

SECOND MURDERER dark humor

Why, he shall never wake until the great Judgement Day.

Why, he'll never wake up until Judgment Day.

But he's never gonna wake up again, period.

he won't wake up ever

FIRST MURDERER insistent

Why, then he’ll say we stabbed him sleeping.

Then he'll complain that we stabbed him in his sleep.

Then he'll say we stabbed him sleeping.

he'll still complain about it

SECOND MURDERER genuinely troubled, the word 'judgment' strikes him

The urging of that word “judgement” hath bred a kind of remorse in me.

That word 'judgment' has started to make me feel guilty.

That word 'judgment' is getting to me. I'm feeling something I didn't expect.

judgment scared me conscience kicked in

FIRST MURDERER testing

What, art thou afraid?

Are you losing your nerve?

You getting scared?

you scared

SECOND MURDERER earnest, moral defense

Not to kill him, having a warrant, but to be damned for killing him,

from the which no warrant can defend me.

I can handle killing him because we have a warrant—but I can't handle being damned for it. A warrant won't save me from God's judgment.

It's not about the killing. The warrant covers that. It's about getting damned for it. No piece of paper is gonna protect me from hell.

warrant protects the deed but not my soul god sees everything no paper covers that

FIRST MURDERER mocking

I thought thou hadst been resolute.

I thought you were tough.

I thought you had guts.

thought you were solid

SECOND MURDERER defiant

So I am—to let him live.

I am—resolute to let him live.

I do. I'm solid about keeping him alive.

i am resolute to keep him alive

FIRST MURDERER threatening

I’ll back to the Duke of Gloucester and tell him so.

Then I'll go back to the Duke of Gloucester and tell him you're backing out.

Fine. I'll go tell Richard you're chickening out.

i'm telling richard you won't do it

SECOND MURDERER pleading, trying to convince himself

Nay, I prithee stay a little. I hope this passionate humour will

change. It was wont to hold me but while one tells twenty.

No, wait. I hope this guilty feeling will pass. It usually only lasts as long as it takes me to count to twenty.

No, hold up. Maybe this feeling will go away. It always does—I just need like a minute.

don't go this feeling will fade i just need time

FIRST MURDERER testing

How dost thou feel thyself now?

How are you feeling now?

You good yet?

you okay yet

SECOND MURDERER honest, struggling

Faith, some certain dregs of conscience are yet within me.

Honestly? Some pieces of guilt are still stuck in me.

Honestly? I've still got some conscience left.

still got guilt in me can't shake it

FIRST MURDERER bribing

Remember our reward, when the deed’s done.

Remember the money we get when it's done.

Just remember what you're getting paid for this.

remember the money think about that

SECOND MURDERER conscience vanishes, greed takes over

Zounds, he dies! I had forgot the reward.

Oh God, he dies! I forgot about the reward!

Oh, right! He's gotta die! I forgot we get paid!

oh shit the money he dies let's do it

FIRST MURDERER mocking

Where’s thy conscience now?

Where's your conscience now?

So what happened to your conscience?

where's your conscience now

SECOND MURDERER cynical, joking

O, in the Duke of Gloucester’s purse.

It's in the Duke of Gloucester's wallet.

It's in Richard's pocket.

in richard's wallet

FIRST MURDERER witty, cold

So, when he opens his purse to give us our reward, thy conscience flies

out.

Right. When he opens his wallet to give us our reward, your conscience will fly out.

Exactly. Once Richard pays us, your conscience disappears.

when he pays your conscience vanishes

SECOND MURDERER dismissive

’Tis no matter; let it go. There’s few or none will entertain it.

No problem. Let it go. Nobody wants it anyway.

Fine. Nobody's gonna hire it. Nobody cares.

don't care no one wants it let it go

FIRST MURDERER pressing, worried

What if it come to thee again?

What if it comes back?

What if it returns?

what if it comes back

SECOND MURDERER disgusted, cynical philosophy

I’ll not meddle with it; it makes a man coward. A man cannot steal but

it accuseth him; a man cannot swear but it checks him; a man cannot lie

with his neighbour’s wife but it detects him. ’Tis a blushing

shamefaced spirit that mutinies in a man’s bosom. It fills a man full

of obstacles. It made me once restore a purse of gold that by chance I

found. It beggars any man that keeps it. It is turned out of towns and

cities for a dangerous thing; and every man that means to live well

endeavours to trust to himself and live without it.

I won't touch it. Conscience makes you weak. A man can't steal without it accusing him. A man can't swear an oath without it stopping him. A man can't cheat on his neighbor's wife without it exposing him. It's a blushing, shameful spirit that causes mutiny in a man's heart. It fills a man with obstacles. It once made me return a purse of gold I found by accident. It ruins any man who keeps it. It's been kicked out of all towns and cities as dangerous. Every man who wants to live well depends on himself and lives without it.

I won't mess with it. Conscience is a weakness. You can't steal without it calling you out. You can't break an oath without it stopping you. You can't sleep with your neighbor's wife without it exposing you. It's this shy, embarrassed spirit that causes fighting inside you. It stops you doing anything. It once made me give back gold I found. It destroys any man who has it. They throw it out of towns because it's too dangerous. Every man who's successful trusts himself and has nothing to do with it.

conscience = weakness tells you everything's wrong stops you from everything kills your life that's why real men have none

FIRST MURDERER frustrated

Zounds, ’tis even now at my elbow, persuading me not to kill the Duke.

For God's sake, my own conscience is right here at my elbow now, trying to talk me out of killing the Duke!

Damn it, my own conscience is pestering me right now, telling me not to kill him.

even i'm getting second thoughts don't kill him my conscience says

SECOND MURDERER pushing, encouraging

Take the devil in thy mind, and believe him not. He would insinuate

with thee but to make thee sigh.

Treat your conscience like the devil in your head and ignore it. It's only trying to upset you.

Look, treat it like the devil talking to you. Don't listen. It just wants to make you sad.

ignore it it's bullshit just wants to mess with you

FIRST MURDERER resolute, proud

I am strong-framed; he cannot prevail with me.

I'm too strong-minded for it to get to me.

I'm tough. It can't break me.

i'm strong can't break me

SECOND MURDERER encouraging, flattering

Spoke like a tall man that respects thy reputation. Come, shall we fall

to work?

That's the right attitude. Now let's get to work.

That's what I'm talking about. Come on, let's do this.

good let's go let's do it

FIRST MURDERER clinical, efficient

Take him on the costard with the hilts of thy sword, and then throw him

in the malmsey-butt in the next room.

Hit him on the head with the hilt of your sword, then throw him in the malmsey barrel in the next room.

Smack him on the head with your sword handle, then dump him in that barrel of wine in the other room.

hit his head with your sword throw him in the wine barrel

SECOND MURDERER darkly amused

O excellent device—and make a sop of him.

Perfect plan—and we'll make a sop of him.

Genius—we'll bread-soak him in wine.

nice soak him in wine like bread

FIRST MURDERER alert, professional

Soft, he wakes.

Wait, he's waking up.

He's coming to.

he's waking up

SECOND MURDERER eager, violent

Strike!

Strike!

Kill him!

do it NOW

FIRST MURDERER controlling

No, we’ll reason with him.

No, we'll talk to him first.

Wait. Let's talk to him.

no talk to him first

CLARENCE groggy, desperate

Where art thou, keeper? Give me a cup of wine.

Where's the keeper? Get me a cup of wine.

Keeper? Can I get some wine?

keeper i need wine please

SECOND MURDERER polite, menacing

You shall have wine enough, my lord, anon.

You'll have plenty of wine soon, my lord.

Don't worry, you'll get your wine.

plenty of wine coming soon

CLARENCE alarmed, confused

In God’s name, what art thou?

In God's name, who are you?

Who are you? What's this?

who the hell are you

FIRST MURDERER calm, menacing

A man, as you are.

A man, like you are.

Just a man, like you.

just a man

CLARENCE asserting status

But not as I am, royal.

But not as I am—royal.

But not like me. I'm royal.

but not like me i'm a prince

SECOND MURDERER sharp reply

Nor you as we are, loyal.

And you're not loyal like we are.

And you're not loyal like us.

and you're not loyal like us

CLARENCE afraid, confused

Thy voice is thunder, but thy looks are humble.

Your voice sounds like thunder, but you look gentle.

You sound harsh but you look meek.

you sound dangerous but look soft

FIRST MURDERER revealing the truth

My voice is now the King’s, my looks mine own.

My voice belongs to the King now. My face is my own.

My voice is the King's. My expression is mine.

i speak for the king my face is mine

CLARENCE ≋ verse panic, desperation

How darkly and how deadly dost thou speak!

Your eyes do menace me; why look you pale?

Who sent you hither? Wherefore do you come?

You speak so darkly and so deadly! Your eyes threaten me. Why do you look so pale? Who sent you here? Why did you come?

The way you talk—it's dark, it's deadly. Your eyes are threatening me. Why are you pale? Who sent you? What do you want?

your voice is death your eyes are threats why pale who sent you why

SECOND MURDERER hesitant, can't say it

To, to, to—

To, to, to...

To... to...

to... to...

CLARENCE understanding the unspoken

To murder me?

To murder me?

To kill me?

to kill me

BOTH MURDERERS confirming, harsh

Ay, ay.

Yes, yes.

Yes, yes.

yes yes

CLARENCE ≋ verse appealing to their humanity

You scarcely have the hearts to tell me so,

And therefore cannot have the hearts to do it.

Wherein, my friends, have I offended you?

You can barely say it, so you can't have the courage to do it. My friends, what have I done to you?

You can barely even say the words, so you don't have the guts to do it. Friends, what did I ever do to you?

you can't even say it how will you do it what did i do to you

FIRST MURDERER cold, obedient

Offended us you have not, but the King.

You haven't offended us—you've offended the King.

You didn't offend us. The King is offended.

you didn't offend us the king is angry

CLARENCE hopeful

I shall be reconciled to him again.

I'll make peace with him again.

I can fix it with him.

i can make it right with the king

SECOND MURDERER final, certain

Never, my lord; therefore prepare to die.

Never, my lord. Prepare to die.

You won't. Get ready to die.

never prepare to die

CLARENCE ≋ verse eloquent, desperate legal argument

Are you drawn forth among a world of men

To slay the innocent? What is my offence?

Where is the evidence that doth accuse me?

What lawful quest have given their verdict up

Unto the frowning judge? Or who pronounced

The bitter sentence of poor Clarence’ death?

Before I be convict by course of law,

To threaten me with death is most unlawful.

I charge you, as you hope to have redemption,

By Christ’s dear blood shed for our grievous sins,

That you depart, and lay no hands on me.

The deed you undertake is damnable.

Are you sent to kill innocent people? What's my crime? Where's the evidence against me? Which jury has convicted me? Which judge pronounced this sentence of death? Before I'm condemned by law, threatening me with death is unlawful. I beg you by Christ's blood, by the suffering He endured for our sins, leave me alone. What you're planning to do is damnable.

Are you hired to go around murdering innocent people? What did I do wrong? Where's your evidence? What jury found me guilty? What judge sentenced me to death? You can't just kill me before a trial. It's illegal. I'm begging you—by Christ's blood, by everything He suffered—don't do this. Let me go. What you're planning is a sin.

what crime where's the evidence who convicted me which judge this is illegal let me go

FIRST MURDERER justifying by authority

What we will do, we do upon command.

We do only what we're ordered to do.

We're just following orders.

we're just following orders

SECOND MURDERER matter-of-fact

And he that hath commanded is our King.

And our King commanded it.

And the King ordered it.

the king ordered it

CLARENCE ≋ verse appealing to divine law

Erroneous vassals! The great King of kings

Hath in the table of his law commanded

That thou shalt do no murder. Will you then

Spurn at His edict and fulfil a man’s?

Take heed, for He holds vengeance in His hand

To hurl upon their heads that break His law.

You're wrong! The King of all kings—God—wrote in His law that you shall not kill. Will you reject God's law and obey a man's? Know that God holds vengeance and will punish those who break His law.

You're backwards! The King of everything—God—wrote in the Bible: don't kill. You're choosing a man's order over God's law? God will punish you for breaking His commandments.

god says don't kill the bible is clear god will punish you for breaking his law

SECOND MURDERER ≋ verse turning his own sins back on him

And that same vengeance doth He hurl on thee

For false forswearing, and for murder too.

Thou didst receive the sacrament to fight

In quarrel of the house of Lancaster.

God does punish you—for breaking your oath and for the murders you committed. You swore to fight for Lancaster, remember?

God is punishing you right now—for breaking your oath and for the people you killed. You swore to fight for Lancaster.

god's already punishing you for your oath-breaking for your murders

FIRST MURDERER ≋ verse accusatory

And like a traitor to the name of God

Didst break that vow, and with thy treacherous blade

Unrippedst the bowels of thy sovereign’s son.

And like a traitor to God's name, you broke that vow and stabbed the King's son to death.

Like a traitor to God, you broke that oath and butchered the King's son.

you traitor you broke your vow you killed the prince

SECOND MURDERER completing the thought

Whom thou wast sworn to cherish and defend.

A man you were sworn to protect.

The one you promised to defend.

the one you promised to protect

FIRST MURDERER ≋ verse turning tables

How canst thou urge God’s dreadful law to us,

When thou hast broke it in such dear degree?

So how can you lecture us about God's law when you broke it so seriously?

So how are you gonna preach God's law to us when you've already broken it so badly?

you're lecturing us about god's law when you broke it badly

CLARENCE ≋ verse desperation, appealing to brotherhood

Alas, for whose sake did I that ill deed?

For Edward, for my brother, for his sake.

He sends you not to murder me for this,

For in that sin he is as deep as I.

If God will be avenged for the deed,

O, know you yet He doth it publicly;

Take not the quarrel from His powerful arm;

He needs no indirect or lawless course

To cut off those that have offended Him.

Ah, but I did that terrible thing for Edward—for my brother. He wouldn't send you to kill me for something he's equally guilty of. If God's going to punish this, He'll do it openly, not through hired murderers. Don't take vengeance into your own hands. God doesn't need illegal means to punish wrongdoers.

But I did that for Edward—my brother. He wouldn't send you to kill me for something he's just as guilty of. If God's going to punish us, He'll do it openly, not through secret murder. Don't steal God's justice. He doesn't need you to do His work.

i did it for edward he's guilty too let god punish don't take justice into your hands

FIRST MURDERER ≋ verse reminding him of past murder

Who made thee then a bloody minister

When gallant-springing, brave Plantagenet,

That princely novice, was struck dead by thee?

Who made you a murderer when you killed that noble young prince at Tewksbury?

Who turned you into a killer when you murdered that young prince at Tewksbury?

you killed that young prince at tewksbury you're no saint

CLARENCE admitting but justifying

My brother’s love, the devil, and my rage.

My brother's love, the devil, and my own rage.

Love for my brother, the devil's temptation, and my own anger.

edward made me do it the devil my anger

FIRST MURDERER ≋ verse ironic, turning it back

Thy brother’s love, our duty, and thy faults,

Provoke us hither now to slaughter thee.

Your brother's love, our duty, and your own faults drive us to slaughter you now.

Love for your brother, our duty, and your crimes—that's what brings us to kill you.

your brother's orders our duty your sins that's why you die

CLARENCE ≋ verse pleading, playing his last card

If you do love my brother, hate not me.

I am his brother, and I love him well.

If you are hired for meed, go back again,

And I will send you to my brother Gloucester,

Who shall reward you better for my life

Than Edward will for tidings of my death.

If you love my brother, don't hate me. I'm his brother and I love him. If you've been hired for money, change your minds. I'll send you to Gloucester, who'll pay you better for my life than Edward will for the news of my death.

If you love Edward, don't hate me. I'm his brother—I love him. If money's the issue, forget it. Go to Richard instead. He'll pay you way more to keep me alive than Edward pays for news of my death.

you love edward so don't hate me come to richard he'll pay more for my life

SECOND MURDERER cruel truth

You are deceived. Your brother Gloucester hates you.

You're mistaken. Your brother Gloucester hates you.

You're wrong. Richard hates you.

richard hates you not loves you

CLARENCE ≋ verse desperate hope, refusal to believe

O no, he loves me, and he holds me dear.

Go you to him from me.

No, he loves me and holds me dear. Go tell him from me.

No. He loves me. He cares about me. Go tell him what I said.

no he loves me go tell him i said so

FIRST MURDERER mocking assent

Ay, so we will.

Yes, we will.

Sure, we will.

yeah sure

CLARENCE ≋ verse invoking family memory and emotion

Tell him when that our princely father York

Blessed his three sons with his victorious arm,

And charged us from his soul to love each other,

He little thought of this divided friendship.

Bid Gloucester think of this, and he will weep.

Tell him when our father York blessed all three of his sons with his victorious arm and charged us from his heart to love each other, he never imagined this. Tell Gloucester to think about that, and he'll weep.

Tell him our father York blessed us three sons with his sword and made us swear to love each other from the heart. He never saw this coming. Tell Richard that. It'll make him cry.

father york blessed us all made us swear to love each other tell him he'll weep

FIRST MURDERER bitter sarcasm

Ay, millstones, as he lessoned us to weep.

Yes—tears as heavy as millstones, just like Richard taught us to cry.

Tears like millstones—right, because Richard's so emotional.

sure richard will cry likemillstones

CLARENCE defending his brother

O, do not slander him, for he is kind.

Don't slander him. He's kind.

Don't talk about him like that. He's good.

don't insult him he's kind

FIRST MURDERER ≋ verse cruel truth

Right, as snow in harvest. Come, you deceive yourself.

’Tis he that sends us to destroy you here.

As kind as snow in the middle of harvest. Stop deceiving yourself. Richard sent us to destroy you.

As kind as snow in summer. Stop lying to yourself. Richard ordered us to kill you.

kind as snow in summer richard ordered this

CLARENCE ≋ verse desperate belief in love

It cannot be, for he bewept my fortune,

And hugged me in his arms, and swore with sobs

That he would labour my delivery.

It can't be. He wept for me and hugged me and swore with tears that he'd work for my release.

No. He cried for me. He held me. He swore he'd set me free.

he cried he held me he swore he'd free me

FIRST MURDERER ≋ verse twisted truth

Why, so he doth, when he delivers you

From this earth’s thraldom to the joys of heaven.

Oh yes, he'll deliver you—from this world's misery to heaven's joy.

He will deliver you. From this world into paradise.

he'll free you from life into heaven

SECOND MURDERER sudden shift to authority

Make peace with God, for you must die, my lord.

Make peace with God. You must die, my lord.

Pray. You're going to die.

pray now you're dying

CLARENCE ≋ verse last, brilliant moral appeal

Have you that holy feeling in your souls

To counsel me to make my peace with God,

And are you yet to your own souls so blind

That you will war with God by murd’ring me?

O sirs, consider: they that set you on

To do this deed will hate you for the deed.

You tell me to make peace with God while you war against Him by murdering me? Think about it—the men who hired you to do this will hate you for doing it.

You're telling me to get right with God while you're committing murder against His will? Think about it—whoever hired you to do this will turn on you afterward.

you tell me to pray while murdering me the ones who hired you will betray you

SECOND MURDERER hesitation, the Second Murderer is moved

What shall we do?

What should we do?

What do we do?

what do we do now

CLARENCE offering the way out

Relent, and save your souls.

Back down and save your souls.

Stand down and save yourselves.

stop save yourselves

FIRST MURDERER brutal dismissal

Relent? No, ’tis cowardly and womanish.

Back down? That's cowardly and unmanly.

Mercy? That's weakness.

that's cowardly

CLARENCE ≋ verse profound, final appeal

Not to relent is beastly, savage, devilish.

Which of you—if you were a prince’s son,

Being pent from liberty, as I am now—

If two such murderers as yourselves came to you,

Would not entreat for life? Ay, you would beg,

Were you in my distress.

My friend, I spy some pity in thy looks.

O, if thine eye be not a flatterer,

Come thou on my side, and entreat for me;

A begging prince what beggar pities not?

Not to back down is bestial, savage, devilish. If you were a prince's son locked up as I am now, and two murderers like you came for you, wouldn't you beg for your life? You would. You'd be on your knees. My friend, I see some pity in your eyes. If your eyes are honest, stand with me. Help me. A begging prince—who wouldn't pity him?

To show no mercy is animal, savage, evil. If you were a prince locked in a cell like me, and two killers showed up, you'd beg for your life. You know you would. My friend, I see something in your face—mercy. If I'm reading you right, help me. Speak for me. A prince begging for his life—how could anyone refuse that?

mercy isn't weakness it's humanity i see pity in your eyes please help me begging

SECOND MURDERER cold interruption

Look behind you, my lord.

Look behind you, my lord.

Turn around.

look behind you

FIRST MURDERER ≋ verse violent, final

Take that, and that! [_Stabs him._] If all this will not do,

I’ll drown you in the malmsey-butt within.

Take that, and that! (Stabs him.) If this isn't enough, I'll drown you in the malmsey barrel next door.

Here! And here! (Stabs him.) If that doesn't work, I'll drown you in that wine barrel over there.

take that and that (stabs him) now the barrel of wine

[_Exit with the body._]
SECOND MURDERER ≋ verse sudden remorse, washing hands of it

A bloody deed, and desperately dispatched.

How fain, like Pilate, would I wash my hands

Of this most grievous murder.

A bloody deed, violently done. Like Pilate, I wish I could wash my hands of this terrible murder.

God, what a bloodbath. I wish I could wash my hands of it like Pilate did.

blood grievous murder wish i could wash it away like pilate

Enter First Murderer.
FIRST MURDERER ≋ verse angry, controlling

How now? What mean’st thou that thou help’st me not?

By heavens, the Duke shall know how slack you have been.

What's wrong? Why didn't you help me? By God, the Duke will hear how lazy you've been.

What are you doing? Why didn't you help? Richard's gonna know how useless you are.

why didn't you help me richard will know

SECOND MURDERER ≋ verse walking away with conscience

I would he knew that I had saved his brother.

Take thou the fee, and tell him what I say,

For I repent me that the Duke is slain.

I wish I'd saved his brother instead. Take the money and tell Richard what I said. I'm sorry the Duke is dead.

I wish I'd saved him. Take the payment and tell Richard I said no. I regret this.

i should've saved him i repent this murder

[_Exit._]
FIRST MURDERER ≋ verse indifferent, practical

So do not I. Go, coward as thou art.

Well, I’ll go hide the body in some hole

Till that the Duke give order for his burial.

And when I have my meed, I will away,

For this will out, and then I must not stay.

I don't regret anything. Get out, coward. Well, I'll hide the body in a hole until the Duke orders the burial. Once I get my payment, I'm leaving. This will come out eventually, and I won't be here when it does.

I don't feel bad. Get out of here, coward. I'll stash the body somewhere until Richard decides what to do with it. Once I get paid, I'm gone. This is gonna come out, and I'm not sticking around.

i don't care i'll hide him get paid and run this will out and i'll be gone

[_Exit._]

The Reckoning

The engine of this scene is the cruelest dramatic irony in the play: Clarence, desperate to survive, keeps invoking his brother Richard as his best hope — 'I will send you to my brother Gloucester, who shall reward you better for my life.' He cannot conceive that Richard is the architect of his murder. Every appeal to brotherhood twists the knife. Shakespeare surrounds this tragedy with two framing movements that make it hit harder: first the dream speech, one of the most beautiful passages he ever wrote, which shows us Clarence's soul before we watch it destroyed; then the murderers' conscience debate, which is low comedy but is actually a precise philosophical argument about whether institutional authority can override personal morality. The answer the play gives is no — which is why the Second Murderer ends the scene washing his hands like Pilate.

If this happened today…

The murderers' exchange — 'What we will do, we do upon command' / 'And he that hath commanded is our King' — is the Nuremberg defense delivered as punch lines. It's still the go-to justification for people who do terrible things inside bureaucratic chains of command: I was just following orders, I had a warrant, I'm not responsible for the meaning of what I was told to do. Brakenbury literally says it out loud: 'I will not reason what is meant hereby, because I will be guiltless of the meaning.' The attempt to outsource moral responsibility to whoever's above you in the org chart is as common in 2025 as it was in 1485.

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