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Act 4, Scene 1 — London. The Palace
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The argument Edward's secret marriage to Lady Grey fractures his coalition: Clarence and Warwick defect, and a messenger reports that France and Lancaster are preparing for war.
Enter Richard (Duke of Gloucester), George (Duke of Clarence), Somerset
and Montague.
RICHARD ≋ verse resolute

Now tell me, brother Clarence, what think you

Of this new marriage with the Lady Grey?

Hath not our brother made a worthy choice?

Now tell me, brother Clarence, what think you Of this new marriage with the Lady Grey? has not our brother made a worthy choice?

Now tell me, brother Clarence, what think you Of this new marriage with the Lady Grey? has not our brother made a worthy choice?

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"Lady Grey" Elizabeth Woodville, widow of a Lancastrian knight — marrying her was politically catastrophic because Edward had been negotiating through Warwick to marry the French princess Bona, and Elizabeth brought no diplomatic value whatsoever.
GEORGE ≋ verse resolute

Alas, you know ’tis far from hence to France!

How could he stay till Warwick made return?

Alas, you know ’tis far from hence to France! How could he stay till Warwick made return?

Alas, you know ’tis far from hence to France! How could he stay till Warwick made return?

how did that even happen

SOMERSET resolute

My lords, forbear this talk; here comes the King.

My lords, forbear this talk; here comes the King.

My lords, forbear this talk; here comes the King.

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Flourish. Enter King Edward, attended; Lady Grey as Queen Elizabeth;
Pembroke, Stafford, Hastings and others. Four stand on one side, and
four on the other.
RICHARD resolute

And his well-chosen bride.

And his well-chosen bride.

And his well-chosen bride.

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GEORGE resolute

I mind to tell him plainly what I think.

I mind to tell him plainly what I think.

I mind to tell him plainly what I think.

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KING EDWARD ≋ verse resolute

Now, brother of Clarence, how like you our choice,

That you stand pensive as half malcontent?

Now, brother of Clarence, how like you our choice, That you stand pensive as half malcontent?

Now, brother of Clarence, how like you our choice, That you stand pensive as half malcontent?

how did that even happen

GEORGE ≋ verse resolute

As well as Lewis of France or the Earl of Warwick,

Which are so weak of courage and in judgment

That they’ll take no offence at our abuse.

As well as Lewis of France or the Earl of Warwick, Which are so weak of courage and in judgment That they’ll take no offence at our abuse.

As well as Lewis of France or the Earl of Warwick, Which are so weak of courage and in judgment That they’ll take no offence at our abuse.

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KING EDWARD ≋ verse resolute

Suppose they take offence without a cause,

They are but Lewis and Warwick; I am Edward,

Your King and Warwick’s, and must have my will.

Suppose they take offence without a cause, They are but Lewis and Warwick; I am Edward, Your King and Warwick’s, and must have my will.

Suppose they take offence without a cause, They are but Lewis and Warwick; I am Edward, Your King and Warwick’s, and must have my will.

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RICHARD ≋ verse resolute

And shall have your will, because our King.

Yet hasty marriage seldom proveth well.

And shall have your will, because our King. Yet hasty marriage seldom proveth well.

And shall have your will, because our King. Yet hasty marriage seldom proveth well.

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KING EDWARD resolute

Yea, brother Richard, are you offended too?

Yea, brother Richard, are you offended too?

Yea, brother Richard, are you offended too?

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RICHARD ≋ verse resolute

Not I.

No, God forbid that I should wish them severed

Whom God hath joined together. Ay, and ’twere pity

To sunder them that yoke so well together.

Not I. No, God forbid that I should wish them severed Whom God has joined together. Ay, and ’twere pity To sunder them that yoke so well together.

Not I. No, God forbid that I should wish them severed Whom God has joined together. Ay, and ’twere pity To sunder them that yoke so well together.

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KING EDWARD ≋ verse resolute

Setting your scorns and your mislike aside,

Tell me some reason why the Lady Grey

Should not become my wife and England’s queen.

And you too, Somerset and Montague,

Speak freely what you think.

Setting your scorns and your mislike aside, Tell me some reason why the Lady Grey Should not become my wife and England’s queen. And you too, Somerset and Montague, Speak freely what you think.

Setting your scorns and your mislike aside, Tell me some reason why the Lady Grey Should not become my wife and England’s queen. And you too, Somerset and Montague, Speak freely what you think.

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GEORGE ≋ verse resolute

Then this is mine opinion: that King Lewis

Becomes your enemy for mocking him

About the marriage of the Lady Bona.

Then this is mine opinion: that King Lewis Becomes your enemy for mocking him About the marriage of the Lady Bona.

Then this is mine opinion: that King Lewis Becomes your enemy for mocking him About the marriage of the Lady Bona.

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RICHARD ≋ verse determined, fierce

And Warwick, doing what you gave in charge,

Is now dishonoured by this new marriage.

And Warwick, doing what you gave in charge, Is now dishonoured by this new marriage.

And Warwick, doing what you gave in charge, Is now dishonoured by this new marriage.

they charged at us

KING EDWARD ≋ verse resolute

What if both Lewis and Warwick be appeased

By such invention as I can devise?

What if both Lewis and Warwick be appeased By such invention as I can devise?

What if both Lewis and Warwick be appeased By such invention as I can devise?

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MONTAGUE ≋ verse resolute

Yet to have joined with France in such alliance

Would more have strengthened this our commonwealth

’Gainst foreign storms than any home-bred marriage.

Yet to have joined with France in such alliance Would more have strengthened this our commonwealth ’Gainst foreign storms than any home-bred marriage.

Yet to have joined with France in such alliance Would more have strengthened this our commonwealth ’Gainst foreign storms than any home-bred marriage.

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HASTINGS ≋ verse resolute

Why, knows not Montague that of itself

England is safe, if true within itself?

Why, knows not Montague that of itself England is safe, if true within itself?

Why, knows not Montague that of itself England is safe, if true within itself?

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MONTAGUE resolute

But the safer when ’tis backed with France.

But the safer when ’tis backed with France.

But the safer when ’tis backed with France.

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HASTINGS ≋ verse resolute

’Tis better using France than trusting France.

Let us be backed with God and with the seas

Which He hath giv’n for fence impregnable,

And with their helps only defend ourselves.

In them and in ourselves our safety lies.

’Tis better using France than trusting France. Let us be backed with God and with the seas Which He has giv’n for fence impregnable, And with their helps only defend ourselves. In them and in ourselves our safety lies.

’Tis better using France than trusting France. Let us be backed with God and with the seas Which He has giv’n for fence impregnable, And with their helps only defend ourselves. In them and in ourselves our safety lies.

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"'Tis better using France than trusting France" A pointed distinction: England could exploit France diplomatically without being bound to her. A cynical but realistic Tudor-era foreign policy position — and one that makes Edward look even more foolish for offending France without getting anything from them.
GEORGE ≋ verse dutiful, committed

For this one speech Lord Hastings well deserves

To have the heir of the Lord Hungerford.

For this one speech Lord Hastings well deserves To have the heir of the Lord Hungerford.

For this one speech Lord Hastings well deserves To have the heir of the Lord Hungerford.

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"heir of the Lord Hungerford" Marriage to a wealthy nobleman's heir was a coveted royal gift — Edward is buying loyalty by distributing noble marriages. This is exactly the kind of patronage he's also just denied Warwick's family.
KING EDWARD ≋ verse resolute

Ay, what of that? It was my will and grant;

And for this once my will shall stand for law.

Ay, what of that? It was my will and grant; And for this once my will shall stand for law.

Ay, what of that? It was my will and grant; And for this once my will shall stand for law.

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RICHARD ≋ verse resolute

And yet, methinks, your Grace hath not done well

To give the heir and daughter of Lord Scales

Unto the brother of your loving bride.

She better would have fitted me or Clarence;

But in your bride you bury brotherhood.

And yet, I think, your Grace has not done well To give the heir and daughter of Lord Scales Unto the brother of your loving bride. She better would have fitted me or Clarence; But in your bride you bury brotherhood.

And yet, I think, your Grace has not done well To give the heir and daughter of Lord Scales Unto the brother of your loving bride. She better would have fitted me or Clarence; But in your bride you bury brotherhood.

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GEORGE ≋ verse resolute

Or else you would not have bestowed the heir

Of the Lord Bonville on your new wife’s son,

And leave your brothers to go speed elsewhere.

Or else you would not have bestowed the heir Of the Lord Bonville on your new wife’s son, And leave your brothers to go speed elsewhere.

Or else you wouldn't have bestowed the heir Of the Lord Bonville on your new wife’s son, And leave your brothers to go speed elsewhere.

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KING EDWARD ≋ verse resolute

Alas, poor Clarence, is it for a wife

That thou art malcontent? I will provide thee.

Alas, poor Clarence, is it for a wife That you are malcontent? I will provide you.

Alas, poor Clarence, is it for a wife That you are malcontent? I will provide you.

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GEORGE ≋ verse resolute

In choosing for yourself you showed your judgment,

Which being shallow, you shall give me leave

To play the broker in mine own behalf;

And to that end I shortly mind to leave you.

In choosing for yourself you showed your judgment, Which being shallow, you shall give me leave To play the broker in mine own behalf; And to that end I shortly mind to leave you.

In choosing for yourself you showed your judgment, Which being shallow, you shall give me leave To play the broker in mine own behalf; And to that end I shortly mind to leave you.

how did that even happen they charged at us

KING EDWARD ≋ verse resolute

Leave me or tarry, Edward will be king,

And not be tied unto his brother’s will.

Leave me or tarry, Edward will be king, And not be tied unto his brother’s will.

Leave me or tarry, Edward will be king, And not be tied unto his brother’s will.

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First appearance
QUEEN ELIZABETH

Elizabeth speaks with a careful, measured dignity that never tips into aggression — she is always aware she is outnumbered. Watch for how she uses the royal 'we' and deferential framing to claim authority she knows is contested.

QUEEN ELIZABETH ≋ verse worried, anxious

My lords, before it pleased his Majesty

To raise my state to title of a queen,

Do me but right, and you must all confess

That I was not ignoble of descent,

And meaner than myself have had like fortune.

But as this title honours me and mine,

So your dislikes, to whom I would be pleasing,

Doth cloud my joys with danger and with sorrow.

My lords, before it pleased his Majesty To raise my state to title of a queen, Do me but right, and you must all confess That I was not ignoble of descent, And meaner than myself have had like fortune. But as this title honours me and mine, So your dislikes, to whom I would be pleasing, does cloud my joys with danger and with sorrow.

My lords, before it pleased his Majesty To raise my state to title of a queen, Do me but right, and you must all confess That I was not ignoble of descent, And meaner than myself have had like fortune. But as this title honours me and mine, So your dislikes, to whom I would be pleasing, does cloud my joys with danger and with sorrow.

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KING EDWARD ≋ verse worried, anxious

My love, forbear to fawn upon their frowns.

What danger or what sorrow can befall thee

So long as Edward is thy constant friend

And their true sovereign, whom they must obey?

Nay, whom they shall obey, and love thee too,

Unless they seek for hatred at my hands;

Which if they do, yet will I keep thee safe,

And they shall feel the vengeance of my wrath.

My love, forbear to fawn upon their frowns. What danger or what sorrow can befall you So long as Edward is your constant friend And their true sovereign, whom they must obey? no, whom they shall obey, and love you too, Unless they seek for hatred at my hands; Which if they do, yet will I keep you safe, And they shall feel the vengeance of my wrath.

My love, forbear to fawn upon their frowns. What danger or what sorrow can befall you So long as Edward is your constant friend And their true sovereign, whom they must obey? no, whom they shall obey, and love you too, Unless they seek for hatred at my hands; Which if they do, yet will I keep you safe, And they shall feel the vengeance of my wrath.

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[_Aside_.] I hear, yet say not much, but think the more.
Enter a Post.
KING EDWARD ≋ verse resolute

Now, messenger, what letters or what news

From France?

Now, messenger, what letters or what news From France?

Now, messenger, what letters or what news From France?

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POST ≋ verse resolute

My sovereign liege, no letters, and few words,

But such as I, without your special pardon,

Dare not relate.

My sovereign liege, no letters, and few words, But such as I, without your special pardon, Dare not relate.

My sovereign liege, no letters, and few words, But such as I, without your special pardon, Dare not relate.

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KING EDWARD ≋ verse resolute

Go to, we pardon thee. Therefore, in brief,

Tell me their words as near as thou canst guess them.

What answer makes King Lewis unto our letters?

Go to, we pardon you. Therefore, in brief, Tell me their words as near as you can guess them. What answer makes King Lewis unto our letters?

Go to, we pardon you. Therefore, in brief, Tell me their words as near as you can guess them. What answer makes King Lewis unto our letters?

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POST ≋ verse resolute

At my depart these were his very words:

“Go tell false Edward, thy supposed king,

That Lewis of France is sending over maskers

To revel it with him and his new bride.”

At my depart these were his very words: “Go tell false Edward, your supposed king, That Lewis of France is sending over maskers To revel it with him and his new bride.”

At my depart these were his very words: “Go tell false Edward, your supposed king, That Lewis of France is sending over maskers To revel it with him and his new bride.”

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"false Edward, thy supposed king" Lewis's language is deliberate: 'false' questions Edward's legitimacy; 'supposed king' denies it outright. This is an act of war in diplomatic language.
KING EDWARD ≋ verse resolute

Is Lewis so brave? Belike he thinks me Henry.

But what said Lady Bona to my marriage?

Is Lewis so brave? Belike he thinks me Henry. But what said Lady Bona to my marriage?

Is Lewis so brave? Belike he thinks me Henry. But what said Lady Bona to my marriage?

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POST ≋ verse resolute

These were her words, uttered with mild disdain:

“Tell him, in hope he’ll prove a widower shortly,

I’ll wear the willow garland for his sake.”

These were her words, uttered with mild disdain: “Tell him, in hope he’ll prove a widower shortly, I’ll wear the willow garland for his sake.”

These were her words, uttered with mild disdain: “Tell him, in hope he’ll prove a widower shortly, I’ll wear the willow garland for his sake.”

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KING EDWARD ≋ verse resolute

I blame not her; she could say little less;

She had the wrong. But what said Henry’s queen?

For I have heard that she was there in place.

I blame not her; she could say little less; She had the wrong. But what said Henry’s queen? For I have heard that she was there in place.

I blame not her; she could say little less; She had the wrong. But what said Henry’s queen? For I have heard that she was there in place.

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POST ≋ verse resolute

“Tell him,” quoth she “my mourning weeds are done,

And I am ready to put armour on.”

“Tell him,” quoth she “my mourning weeds are done, And I am ready to put armour on.”

“Tell him,” quoth she “my mourning weeds are done, And I am ready to put armour on.”

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KING EDWARD ≋ verse resolute

Belike she minds to play the Amazon.

But what said Warwick to these injuries?

Belike she minds to play the Amazon. But what said Warwick to these injuries?

Belike she minds to play the Amazon. But what said Warwick to these injuries?

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"play the Amazon" The Amazons were mythological female warriors. Calling Margaret an Amazon is simultaneously dismissive (she's playing at war) and, for the audience, a kind of grudging acknowledgment that she fights like a man.
POST ≋ verse determined, fierce

He, more incensed against your Majesty

Than all the rest, discharged me with these words:

“Tell him from me that he hath done me wrong,

And therefore I’ll uncrown him ere ’t be long.”

He, more incensed against your Majesty Than all the rest, discharged me with these words: “Tell him from me that he has done me wrong, And therefore I’ll uncrown him before ’t be long.”

He, more incensed against your Majesty Than all the rest, discharged me with these words: “Tell him from me that he has done me wrong, And therefore I’ll uncrown him before ’t be long.”

they charged at us

KING EDWARD ≋ verse resolute

Ha! Durst the traitor breathe out so proud words?

Well, I will arm me, being thus forewarned.

They shall have wars and pay for their presumption.

But say, is Warwick friends with Margaret?

Ha! Durst the traitor breathe out so proud words? Well, I will arm me, being thus forewarned. They shall have wars and pay for their presumption. But say, is Warwick friends with Margaret?

Ha! Durst the traitor breathe out so proud words? Well, I will arm me, being thus forewarned. They shall have wars and pay for their presumption. But say, is Warwick friends with Margaret?

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POST ≋ verse resolute

Ay, gracious sovereign, they are so linked in friendship

That young Prince Edward marries Warwick’s daughter.

Ay, gracious sovereign, they are so linked in friendship That young Prince Edward marries Warwick’s daughter.

Ay, gracious sovereign, they are so linked in friendship That young Prince Edward marries Warwick’s daughter.

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GEORGE ≋ verse resolute

Belike the elder; Clarence will have the younger.

Now, brother king, farewell, and sit you fast,

For I will hence to Warwick’s other daughter;

That, though I want a kingdom, yet in marriage

I may not prove inferior to yourself.

You that love me and Warwick, follow me.

Belike the elder; Clarence will have the younger. Now, brother king, farewell, and sit you fast, For I will hence to Warwick’s other daughter; That, though I want a kingdom, yet in marriage I may not prove inferior to yourself. You that love me and Warwick, follow me.

Belike the elder; Clarence will have the younger. Now, brother king, farewell, and sit you fast, For I will hence to Warwick’s other daughter; That, though I want a kingdom, yet in marriage I may not prove inferior to yourself. You that love me and Warwick, follow me.

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[_Exit George and Somerset follows._]
[_Aside_.] Not I. My thoughts aim at a further matter;
RICHARD resolute

I stay not for the love of Edward, but the crown.

I stay not for the love of Edward, but the crown.

I stay not for the love of Edward, but the crown.

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KING EDWARD ≋ verse resolute

Clarence and Somerset both gone to Warwick!

Yet am I armed against the worst can happen,

And haste is needful in this desperate case.

Pembroke and Stafford, you in our behalf

Go levy men and make prepare for war;

They are already, or quickly will be, landed.

Myself in person will straight follow you.

Clarence and Somerset both gone to Warwick! Yet am I armed against the worst can happen, And haste is needful in this desperate case. Pembroke and Stafford, you in our behalf Go levy men and make prepare for war; They are already, or quickly will be, landed. Myself in person will straight follow you.

Clarence and Somerset both gone to Warwick! Yet am I armed against the worst can happen, And haste is needful in this desperate case. Pembroke and Stafford, you in our behalf Go levy men and make prepare for war; They are already, or quickly will be, landed. Myself in person will straight follow you.

they charged at us

[_Exeunt Pembroke and Stafford._]
But, ere I go, Hastings and Montague,
Resolve my doubt. You twain, of all the rest,
Are near to Warwick by blood and by alliance.
Tell me if you love Warwick more than me.
If it be so, then both depart to him.
I rather wish you foes than hollow friends.
But if you mind to hold your true obedience,
Give me assurance with some friendly vow,
That I may never have you in suspect.
MONTAGUE resolute

So God help Montague as he proves true!

So God help Montague as he proves true!

So God help Montague as he proves true!

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HASTINGS resolute

And Hastings as he favours Edward’s cause!

And Hastings as he favours Edward’s cause!

And Hastings as he favours Edward’s cause!

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KING EDWARD resolute

Now, brother Richard, will you stand by us?

Now, brother Richard, will you stand by us?

Now, brother Richard, will you stand by us?

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RICHARD resolute

Ay, in despite of all that shall withstand you.

Ay, in despite of all that shall withstand you.

Ay, in despite of all that shall withstand you.

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🎭 Dramatic irony Richard says he stands by Edward 'in despite of all that shall withstand you' — which is technically true, but the audience who knows the Richard III story understands that Richard himself will one day be the thing that withstands Edward's heirs.
KING EDWARD ≋ verse resolute

Why, so! Then am I sure of victory.

Now, therefore, let us hence, and lose no hour

Till we meet Warwick with his foreign power.

Why, so! Then am I sure of victory. Now, therefore, let us hence, and lose no hour Till we meet Warwick with his foreign power.

Why, so! Then am I sure of victory. Now, therefore, let us hence, and lose no hour Till we meet Warwick with his foreign power.

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[_Exeunt._]

The Reckoning

Edward has won the crown but immediately squanders his political capital by marrying beneath his station — or rather, outside his diplomats' careful negotiations. His brothers barely bother to hide their contempt, and when the French messenger arrives with Warwick's furious words, the defections begin in real time. The audience watches a winning position dismantled by one man's stubbornness, while Richard quietly notes that he stays not for love but for the crown.

If this happened today…

A startup CEO, just having closed a huge Series B, announces he's hired his girlfriend as COO — bypassing the search firm, the board's preferred candidates, and the alliance with a major corporate partner who was expecting a seat at the table. The board chair (Warwick) had already pitched that partner on a merger. Now the partner's CEO is calling to say the deal is dead and they're funding the competition. Two co-founders post their resignation letters on LinkedIn before the meeting is over. One stays — but you notice him updating his resume under the table.

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