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Act 4, Scene 7 — A camp at a short distance from Rome
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The argument Aufidius, increasingly overshadowed by Coriolanus in the Volscian camp, reveals to his lieutenant that he is building a case to destroy him — and offers an analysis of what made Coriolanus fall.
Enter Aufidius with his Lieutenant.
AUFIDIUS [AUFIDIUS]

Do they still fly to th’ Roman?

Do they still fly to th’ Roman?

Do they still fly to th’ Roman?

do they still fly to th’ roman?

First appearance
LIEUTENANT

The Lieutenant speaks with the candor of a loyal subordinate who knows he's being trusted with dangerous information. Watch for how he never pushes further than Aufidius invites.

LIEUTENANT ≋ verse [LIEUTENANT]

I do not know what witchcraft’s in him, but

Your soldiers use him as the grace ’fore meat,

Their talk at table, and their thanks at end;

And you are dark’ned in this action, sir,

Even by your own.

I do not know what witchcraft’s in him, but Your soldiers use him as the grace ’fore meat, Their talk at table, and their thanks at end; And you are dark’ned in this action, sir, Even by your own.

I do not know what witchcraft’s in him, but Your soldiers use him as the grace ’fore meat, Their talk at table, and their thanks at end; And you are dark’ned in this action, sir, Even by your own.

i do not know what witchcraft’s in him, but your soldiers us

AUFIDIUS ≋ verse [AUFIDIUS]

I cannot help it now,

Unless by using means I lame the foot

Of our design. He bears himself more proudlier,

Even to my person, than I thought he would

When first I did embrace him. Yet his nature

In that’s no changeling, and I must excuse

What cannot be amended.

I cannot help it now, Unless by using means I lame the foot Of our design. He bears himself more proudlier, Even to my person, than I thought he would When first I did embrace him. Yet his nature In that’s no changeling, and I must excuse What cannot be amended.

I cannot help it now, Unless by using means I lame the foot Of our design. He bears himself more proudlier, Even to my person, than I thought he would When first I did embrace him. Yet his nature In that’s no changeling, and I must excuse What cannot be amended.

i cannot help it now, unless by using means i lame the foot

LIEUTENANT ≋ verse [LIEUTENANT]

Yet I wish, sir—

I mean for your particular—you had not

Joined in commission with him, but either

Had borne the action of yourself or else

To him had left it solely.

Yet I wish, sir— I mean for your particular—you had not Joined in commission with him, but either Had borne the action of yourself or else To him had left it solely.

Yet I wish, sir— I mean for your particular—you had not Joined in commission with him, but either Had borne the action of yourself or else To him had left it solely.

yet i wish, sir— i mean for your particular—you had not join

AUFIDIUS ≋ verse [AUFIDIUS]

I understand thee well, and be thou sure,

When he shall come to his account, he knows not

What I can urge against him, although it seems,

And so he thinks and is no less apparent

To th’ vulgar eye, that he bears all things fairly,

And shows good husbandry for the Volscian state,

Fights dragonlike, and does achieve as soon

As draw his sword; yet he hath left undone

That which shall break his neck or hazard mine

Whene’er we come to our account.

I understand thee well, and be thou sure, When he shall come to his account, he knows not What I can urge against him, although it seems, And so he thinks and is no less apparent To th’ vulgar eye, that he bears all things fairly, And shows good husbandry for the Volscian state, Fights dragonlike, and does achieve as soon As draw his sword; yet he hath left undone That which shall break his neck or hazard mine Whene’er we come to our account.

I understand thee well, and be thou sure, When he shall come to his account, he knows not What I can urge against him, although it seems, And so he thinks and is no less apparent To th’ vulgar eye, that he bears all things fairly, And shows good husbandry for the Volscian state, Fights dragonlike, and does achieve as soon As draw his sword; yet he hath left undone That which shall break his neck or hazard mine Whene’er we come to our account.

i understand thee well, and be thou sure, when he shall come

🎭 Dramatic irony Aufidius tells his lieutenant that Coriolanus 'hath left undone / That which shall break his neck' — meaning the peace treaty with Rome. The audience will watch Coriolanus make that exact choice in 5-3, not knowing it is the trap.
LIEUTENANT [LIEUTENANT]

Sir, I beseech you, think you he’ll carry Rome?

Sir, I beseech you, think you he’ll carry Rome?

Sir, I beseech you, think you he’ll carry Rome?

sir, i beseech you, think you he’ll carry rome?

AUFIDIUS ≋ verse [AUFIDIUS]

All places yield to him ere he sits down,

And the nobility of Rome are his;

The Senators and Patricians love him too.

The Tribunes are no soldiers, and their people

Will be as rash in the repeal as hasty

To expel him thence. I think he’ll be to Rome

As is the osprey to the fish, who takes it

By sovereignty of nature. First, he was

A noble servant to them, but he could not

Carry his honours even. Whether ’twas pride,

Which out of daily fortune ever taints

The happy man; whether defect of judgment,

To fail in the disposing of those chances

Which he was lord of; or whether nature,

Not to be other than one thing, not moving

From th’ casque to th’ cushion, but commanding peace

Even with the same austerity and garb

As he controlled the war; but one of these—

As he hath spices of them all—not all,

For I dare so far free him—made him feared,

So hated, and so banished. But he has a merit

To choke it in the utt’rance. So our virtues

Lie in th’ interpretation of the time,

And power, unto itself most commendable,

Hath not a tomb so evident as a chair

T’ extol what it hath done.

One fire drives out one fire, one nail one nail;

Rights by rights falter; strengths by strengths do fail.

Come, let’s away. When, Caius, Rome is thine,

Thou art poor’st of all; then shortly art thou mine.

All places yield to him ere he sits down, And the nobility of Rome are his; The Senators and Patricians love him too. The Tribunes are no soldiers, and their people Will be as rash in the repeal as hasty To expel him thence. I think he’ll be to Rome As is the osprey to the fish, who takes it By sovereignty of nature. First, he was A noble servant to them, but he could not Carry his honours even. Whether ’twas pride, Which out of daily fortune ever taints The happy man; whether defect of judgment, To fail in the disposing of those chances Which he was lord of; or whether nature, Not to be other than one thing, not moving From th’ casque to th’ cushion, but commanding peace Even with the same austerity and garb As he controlled the war; but one of these— As he hath spices of them all—not all, For I dare so far free him—made him feared, So hated, and so banished. But he has a merit To choke it in the utt’rance. So our virtues Lie in th’ interpretation of the time, And power, unto itself most commendable, Hath not a tomb so evident as a chair T’ extol what it hath done. One fire drives out one fire, one nail one nail; Rights by rights falter; strengths by strengths do fail. Come, let’s away. When, Caius, Rome is thine, Thou art poor’st of all; then shortly art thou mine.

All places yield to him ere he sits down, And the nobility of Rome are his; The Senators and Patricians love him too. The Tribunes are no soldiers, and their people Will be as rash in the repeal as hasty To expel him thence. I think he’ll be to Rome As is the osprey to the fish, who takes it By sovereignty of nature. First, he was A noble servant to them, but he could not Carry his honours even. Whether ’twas pride, Which out of daily fortune ever taints The happy man; whether defect of judgment, To fail in the disposing of those chances Which he was lord of; or whether nature, Not to be other than one thing, not moving From th’ casque to th’ cushion, but commanding peace Even with the same austerity and garb As he controlled the war; but one of these— As he hath spices of them all—not all, For I dare so far free him—made him feared, So hated, and so banished. But he has a merit To choke it in the utt’rance. So our virtues Lie in th’ interpretation of the time, And power, unto itself most commendable, Hath not a tomb so evident as a chair T’ extol what it hath done. One fire drives out one fire, one nail one nail; Rights by rights falter; strengths by strengths do fail. Come, let’s away. When, Caius, Rome is thine, Thou art poor’st of all; then shortly art thou mine.

all places yield to him ere he sits down, and the nobility o

↩ Callback to 4-5 The embrace of 4-5 — 'more a friend than e'er an enemy' — is retroactively revealed as performance: Aufidius was already calculating even in that moment of apparent warmth.
[_Exeunt._]

The Reckoning

A short scene, and one of the most chilling in the play: Aufidius, who just embraced Coriolanus with his whole heart, is already planning his destruction. The ending couplet — 'When, Caius, Rome is thine, thou art poorest of all; then shortly art thou mine' — is one of the finest lines in the play. The audience watches the trap close before the prey has any idea it exists.

If this happened today…

The CEO who just brought a legendary turnaround artist into the firm tells his COO that yes, the numbers are good — but the guy is already taking all the credit, the staff worships him, and the board is starting to ask why they need two leaders. The CEO is already thinking about how the moment this is over, the turnaround artist goes. The perfect moment to use him is also the moment to build the case against him.

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