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Act 1, Scene 5 — Within Corioles. A street
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The argument Inside the conquered Corioles, Martius drives off looting Roman soldiers and departs to find Aufidius at Cominius's battle, leaving Lartius to hold the city.
Enter certain Romans, with spoils.
FIRST ROMAN possessive determination

This will I carry to Rome.

I'm taking this to Rome.

This one's mine. Going to Rome.

im keeping this for rome

SECOND ROMAN mutual agreement

And I this.

And I'm taking this.

Yeah, I'm taking mine too.

im taking this one

THIRD ROMAN disappointed realization

A murrain on’t! I took this for silver.

A plague on it! I thought this was silver.

Damn it! I thought this was real silver.

damn i thought silver nope

Enter Martius and Titus Lartius with a Trumpet.
MARTIUS ≋ verse contemptuous command

See here these movers that do prize their hours

At a cracked drachma. Cushions, leaden spoons,

Irons of a doit, doublets that hangmen would

Bury with those that wore them, these base slaves,

Ere yet the fight be done, pack up. Down with them!

Look at these men here who value their hours for a worthless coin. Cushions, lead spoons, iron trinkets worth nothing — the kind of rags that grave-diggers would bury with corpses. These contemptible slaves are packing their loot before the battle is even done. Stop it! Get that trash out of here!

See these guys? They're trading their time as soldiers for junk coins. Pillows, cheap spoons, worthless iron — the kind of garbage they'd bury with dead bodies. These pathetic scavengers are already bagging plunder while men are still dying. Stop it now! Clear out the junk!

look at these looters trading honor for trash cushions spoons worthless garbage throw it out go

[_Exit the Romans with spoils._]
[_Alarum continues still afar off._]
And hark, what noise the General makes! To him!
There is the man of my soul’s hate, Aufidius,
Piercing our Romans. Then, valiant Titus, take
Convenient numbers to make good the city,
Whilst I, with those that have the spirit, will haste
To help Cominius.
LARTIUS ≋ verse blessing and prayer

Worthy sir, thou bleed’st.

Thy exercise hath been too violent

For a second course of fight.

Now may the fair goddess Fortune fall deeply in love with you, and may her great magic confuse your enemies' blades! Bold soldier, may Success follow you like a page!

May Fortune herself fall for you, and may her power mess with your enemies' swords! Go boldly — let Success be your servant!

fortune fall for you magic confuses enemies bold success follows

MARTIUS ≋ verse reciprocal farewell

Sir, praise me not.

My work hath yet not warmed me. Fare you well.

The blood I drop is rather physical

Than dangerous to me. To Aufidius thus

I will appear and fight.

You are no less my friend than any man Fortune favors most. Goodbye.

You matter to me as much as anyone ever has. See you later.

youre my friend as much as anyone goodbye

LARTIUS ≋ verse final salute

Now the fair goddess Fortune

Fall deep in love with thee, and her great charms

Misguide thy opposers’ swords! Bold gentleman,

Prosperity be thy page!

You are the worthiest Martius!

You're the best there is, Martius!

youre the best worthiest martius

MARTIUS ≋ verse stage direction

Thy friend no less

Than those she placeth highest! So farewell.

Martius exits, heading toward the battle where Cominius and Aufidius fight.

Martius leaves to find Aufidius.

martius exits to aufidius

LARTIUS command to subordinate

Thou worthiest Martius!

Go blow your trumpet in the city square.

Sound the trumpet in the marketplace.

sound the trumpet in the square

[_Exit Martius._]
Go sound thy trumpet in the marketplace.
Call thither all the officers o’ th’ town,
Where they shall know our mind. Away!
[_Exeunt._]

The Reckoning

Corioles is taken, but Martius won't stay to enjoy it. The scene is essentially his refusal to profit from what he just won — he's bleeding, the battle has barely ended, and his only thought is to find Aufidius. The looting soldiers are, to him, worse than the enemy: they put survival ahead of glory. The audience sees a man who is genuinely unable to stop.

If this happened today…

The startup's product just launched successfully. While the team is cracking champagne and divvying up the credit, the lead engineer is already at his laptop, frustrated: 'The real competition just released their beta — we have to go right now.' His co-founder tries to get him to rest. He's already out the door. That's Martius in 1-5.

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