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Act 1, Scene 5 — Within Corioles. A street
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The argument Inside the conquered Corioles, Martius drives off looting Roman soldiers and departs to find Aufidius at Cominius's battle, leaving Lartius to hold the city.
Enter certain Romans, with spoils.
FIRST ROMAN [possessive determination]

This will I carry to Rome.

I'm taking this to Rome.

This one's mine. Going to Rome.

im keeping this for rome

SECOND ROMAN [mutual agreement]

And I this.

And I'm taking this.

Yeah, I'm taking mine too.

im taking this one

THIRD ROMAN [disappointed realization]

A murrain on’t! I took this for silver.

A plague on it! I thought this was silver.

Damn it! I thought this was real silver.

damn i thought silver nope

Enter Martius and Titus Lartius with a Trumpet.
MARTIUS ≋ verse [contemptuous command]

See here these movers that do prize their hours

At a cracked drachma. Cushions, leaden spoons,

Irons of a doit, doublets that hangmen would

Bury with those that wore them, these base slaves,

Ere yet the fight be done, pack up. Down with them!

Look at these men here who value their hours for a worthless coin. Cushions, lead spoons, iron trinkets worth nothing — the kind of rags that grave-diggers would bury with corpses. These contemptible slaves are packing their loot before the battle is even done. Stop it! Get that trash out of here!

See these guys? They're trading their time as soldiers for junk coins. Pillows, cheap spoons, worthless iron — the kind of garbage they'd bury with dead bodies. These pathetic scavengers are already bagging plunder while men are still dying. Stop it now! Clear out the junk!

look at these looters trading honor for trash cushions spoons worthless garbage throw it out go

[_Exit the Romans with spoils._]
[_Alarum continues still afar off._]
MARTIUS ≋ verse [hate-fueled urgency — rushing to Aufidius]

And hark, what noise the General makes! To him!

There is the man of my soul’s hate, Aufidius,

Piercing our Romans. Then, valiant Titus, take

Convenient numbers to make good the city,

Whilst I, with those that have the spirit, will haste

To help Cominius.

Listen to the noise the General is making! We must go to him! There is my bitter enemy, Aufidius, attacking through our Roman lines. Then, valiant Titus, take enough soldiers to hold the city, while I, with those who have courage, will hurry to help Cominius.

Hear that commotion? That's the General making trouble! Let's go after him! There's Aufidius—my worst enemy—breaking through our lines. Titus, stay here with enough men to defend the city. I'll take the brave ones and rush to help Cominius.

hear that aufidius attacking let's go hold the city

LARTIUS ≋ verse [anxious concern — urging him to stop]

Worthy sir, thou bleed’st.

Thy exercise hath been too violent

For a second course of fight.

Worthy sir, you're bleeding. Your exertion has been too violent for a second round of fighting.

Sir, you're bleeding. You've fought too hard already for another battle.

ur bleeding. u fought 2 hard

MARTIUS ≋ verse [brushing off pain — impatient to fight]

Sir, praise me not.

My work hath yet not warmed me. Fare you well.

The blood I drop is rather physical

Than dangerous to me. To Aufidius thus

I will appear and fight.

Sir, don't praise me. My work has not yet exhausted me. Goodbye. The blood I lose is merely physical, not dangerous to me. I will appear and fight Aufidius just as I am.

Sir, don't praise me. I'm not even tired yet. Take care. This blood is nothing serious. I'm going to go face and fight Aufidius just like this.

dont praise me. im fine. gonna fight aufidius

LARTIUS ≋ verse [fervent prayer — invoking Fortune's favor]

Now the fair goddess Fortune

Fall deep in love with thee, and her great charms

Misguide thy opposers’ swords! Bold gentleman,

Prosperity be thy page!

Now may the fair goddess Fortune fall deeply in love with you, and may her great powers confuse your enemies' swords! Bold gentleman, may Prosperity follow you!

May Fortune herself fall in love with you and make your enemies' swords go astray! You brave man, may success follow you everywhere!

may fortune b w u. may luck b urs

MARTIUS ≋ verse [reciprocating the blessing — parting words]

Thy friend no less

Than those she placeth highest! So farewell.

Your friend no less than those she favors most highly! So goodbye.

I'm your friend just as much as those she favors most. Goodbye.

ur friend. bye

LARTIUS [admiring exclamation — praising as he departs]

Thou worthiest Martius!

You most excellent soldier, Martius!

Martius, you're the best!

ur the best martius

[_Exit Martius._]
LARTIUS ≋ verse [brisk command — summoning the officers]

Go sound thy trumpet in the marketplace.

Call thither all the officers o’ th’ town,

Where they shall know our mind. Away!

Go sound the trumpet in the marketplace. Call all the town's officers there so they'll know what we intend. Go!

Go blow that trumpet in the marketplace. Get all the town's officers there so they know what we're planning. Now go!

sound trumpet in the marketplace call the officers let them know

[_Exeunt._]

The Reckoning

Corioles is taken, but Martius won't stay to enjoy it. The scene is essentially his refusal to profit from what he just won — he's bleeding, the battle has barely ended, and his only thought is to find Aufidius. The looting soldiers are, to him, worse than the enemy: they put survival ahead of glory. The audience sees a man who is genuinely unable to stop.

If this happened today…

The startup's product just launched successfully. While the team is cracking champagne and divvying up the credit, the lead engineer is already at his laptop, frustrated: 'The real competition just released their beta — we have to go right now.' His co-founder tries to get him to rest. He's already out the door. That's Martius in 1-5.

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