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The argument Cleopatra learns Antony is dying and has him brought up to her in the monument. He dies in her arms after confessing he was conquered only by himself, not by Caesar. Cleopatra despairs, vows never to be paraded by Caesar, and swears to follow Antony in death with dignity.
Enter Cleopatra and her maids aloft, with Charmian and Iras.
First appearance
CLEOPATRA

Her grief swings between cosmic and homely registers. She commands the sun to 'burn the great sphere thou mov'st in,' then jokes grimly, 'Here's sport indeed! How heavy weighs my lord!' as she hauls him up. After his death she sees herself as 'no more but e'en a woman,' like 'the maid that milks,' then gathers herself into Roman resolve: 'make death proud to take us.'

CLEOPATRA [refusing to leave the monument]

O Charmian, I will never go from hence.

Charmian, I will never leave this place.

Charmian, I'm staying right here.

im staying

First appearance
CHARMIAN

The steadying voice among the women. She opens with plain comfort, 'Be comforted, dear madam,' which Cleopatra refuses. When her mistress faints, her lines shrink to broken cries, 'O madam, madam, madam!', but she is the one who quiets Iras with 'Peace, peace,' keeping order even inside the panic.

CHARMIAN [gently trying to console her]

Be comforted, dear madam.

Be comforted, dear lady.

Try to find some comfort.

find peace

CLEOPATRA ≋ verse [defiantly embracing her grief]

No, I will not.

All strange and terrible events are welcome,

But comforts we despise. Our size of sorrow,

Proportioned to our cause, must be as great

As that which makes it.

No, I won't accept comfort. All strange and terrible things are welcome to me, but comfort itself I reject. Our grief must be proportional to our loss—it must be as great as the thing that caused it.

No. Bring on all the terrible, strange things—they're welcome. But comfort? I reject it completely. My sorrow has to match what I've lost. It has to be as massive as the loss.

no comfort for me i welcome terrible things but im done w comfort my sorrow matches my loss

Enter, below Diomedes.
CLEOPATRA [fearful, bracing for the worst]

How now! Is he dead?

So what! Is he dead?

Is he dead?

he dead?

DIOMEDES ≋ verse [urgently directing her to him]

His death’s upon him, but not dead.

Look out o’ th’ other side your monument;

His guard have brought him thither.

Death is taking hold of him, but he is not yet dead. Look out from the other side of your monument; his guards have carried him here.

He's dying but not dead yet. Look out the other side of the monument—his guards brought him here.

hes dying not dead look at other side of monument they brought him

Enter, below Antony borne by the Guard.
CLEOPATRA ≋ verse [anguished cry at seeing him dying]

O sun,

Burn the great sphere thou mov’st in! Darkling stand

The varying shore o’ th’ world. O Antony,

Antony, Antony! Help, Charmian! Help, Iras, help!

Help, friends below! Let’s draw him hither.

O sun, burn away the great sphere that you circle! Darkness covers the changing shores of the world. O Antony, Antony, Antony! Help me, Charmian! Help, Iras, help! Help, friends below! Let's pull him up here.

Sun, burn up the whole sky! Darkness has fallen on the world's shores. Antony! Antony! Antony! Help me, Charmian! Iras, help! Friends, help me from below! Let's pull him up here!

sun burn everything down world is dark antony antony antony help pull him up

"Burn the great sphere thou mov'st in! Darkling stand / The varying shore o' th' world" Cleopatra addresses the sun itself, asking it to burn out. The world's shores tremble—the universe reacts to Antony's dying. It's hyperbole that feels true in the moment.
Why it matters [object Object]
First appearance
ANTONY

Short of breath but still proud of his name. He speaks in clipped, urgent phrases ('I am dying, Egypt, dying'; 'O, quick, or I am gone') and saves his strength for self-epitaph: 'a Roman by a Roman / Valiantly vanquished.' Even dying he offers practical advice, telling her to trust Proculeius, and asks her to remember him as 'the greatest prince o' th' world.'

ANTONY ≋ verse [proud even as he dies]

Peace!

Not Caesar’s valour hath o’erthrown Antony,

But Antony’s hath triumphed on itself.

Silence! It was not Caesar's courage that overthrew me, but my own courage has triumphed—over itself.

Quiet! Caesar's courage didn't beat me. My own courage defeated itself.

im not beaten by caesar im beaten by myself

"Not Caesar's valour hath o'erthrown Antony, / But Antony's hath triumphed on itself" Antony's final truth: he defeated himself through error and grief, not through Caesar's superior force. It's an admission and a victory—he owns his end.
Why it matters [object Object]
CLEOPATRA ≋ verse [bitter irony amid grief]

So it should be, that none but Antony

Should conquer Antony, but woe ’tis so!

It should be true that only Antony can conquer Antony, yet sadly it is true!

You're right—only you could beat yourself. But what a tragedy that you have!

yeah only u could beat u but oh god its so sad

ANTONY ≋ verse [fading, longing for one last kiss]

I am dying, Egypt, dying. Only

I here importune death awhile until

Of many thousand kisses the poor last

I lay upon thy lips.

I am dying, Egypt, dying. I'm asking death to wait just a moment longer so I can place the last of countless kisses on your lips.

Egypt, I'm dying. I'm asking death to give me one more moment so I can kiss you one last time.

im dying give me one last kiss

"I am dying, Egypt, dying" Antony's final signature phrase—'Egypt' is Cleopatra, the country he fought for. It's his last word to her, the only name that matters.
Why it matters [object Object]
🎭 Dramatic irony Antony stabbed himself thinking Cleopatra was already dead and waiting for him in the afterlife. Now he is dying in the arms of a woman who is very much alive. The death he chose to rejoin her has instead parted them.
CLEOPATRA ≋ verse [torn between love and fear of capture]

I dare not, dear

Dear my lord, pardon. I dare not,

Lest I be taken. Not th’ imperious show

Of the full-fortuned Caesar ever shall

Be brooched with me; if knife, drugs, serpents, have

Edge, sting, or operation, I am safe.

Your wife Octavia, with her modest eyes

And still conclusion, shall acquire no honour

Demuring upon me. But come, come, Antony—

Help me, my women—we must draw thee up.

Assist, good friends.

I dare not hold you close, for I might be captured and taken. Caesar's grand show of power will never make me his display; if there are knives, drugs, or serpents available, I will be safe and free. Your wife Octavia, with her modest bearing and quiet manner, will gain no victory over me. But come, Antony—help me, my women—we must pull you up. Help, friends!

I can't hold you—they might grab me. Caesar won't parade me in his triumph—if there are knives or poisons or snakes available, I'll be safe. Octavia, with her quiet little eyes and proper manners, won't get any honor from standing over me. But come on, Antony—women, help me—we need to pull him up. Friends, assist!

cant hold u or ill be taken ill kill myself b4 caesar parades me octavia wont win help pull u up

"Not th' imperious show / Of the full-fortuned Caesar ever shall / Be brooched with me" Cleopatra swears Caesar will never 'brooch' her with his triumph—dress her up like a trophy. She'll take her own life first.
Why it matters [object Object]
🎭 Dramatic irony Cleopatra's false report of her own death drove Antony to fall on his sword. Now, alive and afraid of being captured, she will not even come down to him, so the man who died for her has to be hauled up to her monument.
ANTONY [urgent, slipping away]

O, quick, or I am gone.

Quickly, or I will be gone.

Hurry, I'm almost gone.

hurry im fading

CLEOPATRA ≋ verse [straining, grim humor through the effort]

Here’s sport indeed! How heavy weighs my lord!

Our strength is all gone into heaviness;

That makes the weight. Had I great Juno’s power,

The strong-winged Mercury should fetch thee up

And set thee by Jove’s side. Yet come a little;

Wishers were ever fools. O come, come come,

What a task! How heavy you are, my lord! All our strength has turned to grief; that's what makes this weight. If I had Juno's great power, I'd have swift Mercury bring you up and place you beside Jove himself. But come just a little higher; it's foolish to just wish. Come, come, come.

You're so heavy! All our strength is gone to sadness—that's why you weigh so much. If I had Juno's power, I'd have Mercury fly you up and set you beside Jove himself. But come up a little more; it's foolish to just wish. Come on, come on, come!

ur so heavy our strength is all grief if i had gods power id fly u up just more come on

"Had I great Juno's power" Juno is queen of heaven; Mercury is the swift messenger god. Cleopatra wishes she had divine strength to lift him easily.
[_They heave Antony aloft to Cleopatra._]
CLEOPATRA ≋ verse [desperate to revive him with kisses]

And welcome, welcome! Die where thou hast lived;

Quicken with kissing. Had my lips that power,

Thus would I wear them out.

And welcome, welcome! Die here where you've lived; come back to life with kissing. If my lips had that power, I would wear them out this way.

Welcome, welcome! Die right here where you've been living; come back to life with my kisses. If my lips could revive you, I'd kiss you until they wore away.

welcome die here where you lived. if my lips could revive you i'd wear them out kissing

ALL [onlookers' shared grief]

A heavy sight!

A heavy sight!

A heavy sight!

a heavy sight!

ANTONY ≋ verse [weakly asking for one last moment]

I am dying, Egypt, dying.

Give me some wine, and let me speak a little.

I am dying, Egypt, dying. Give me some wine, and allow me to speak for a moment.

Egypt, I'm dying. Give me wine so I can say something.

im dying give me wine let me speak

CLEOPATRA ≋ verse [raging against fate itself]

No, let me speak, and let me rail so high

That the false huswife Fortune break her wheel,

Provoked by my offence.

No, let me speak, and let me rage so powerfully that false Fortune herself will break her wheel, angered by my words.

No, I'm going to speak. I'm going to rant so hard that Fortune herself will snap her wheel in anger at what I say.

let me speak im gonna rant til fortune breaks

"Let me rail so high / That the false huswife Fortune break her wheel" Fortune is traditionally depicted with a wheel that turns. Cleopatra wants her rage to be so absolute it breaks the wheel itself—stops the world's turning.
ANTONY ≋ verse [urging her to safety with his last breath]

One word, sweet queen:

Of Caesar seek your honour, with your safety. O!

One thing, sweet queen: seek your honor and safety from Caesar.

One thing, my queen: protect yourself with Caesar and find your honor there.

seek safety w caesar

CLEOPATRA [refusing to trust Caesar]

They do not go together.

These two things are incompatible.

You can't have both at the same time.

cant have both

"They do not go together" Cleopatra means: honor and dealing with Caesar can't coexist. If she's Caesar's captive, she has no honor. If she keeps honor, she can't be safe under Caesar.
Why it matters [object Object]
ANTONY ≋ verse [urgent final counsel]

Gentle, hear me.

None about Caesar trust but Proculeius.

Hear me, kind one. Trust no one near Caesar except Proculeius.

Listen to me. Don't trust anyone around Caesar except Proculeius.

trust only proculeius

CLEOPATRA ≋ verse [defiant, trusting only herself]

My resolution and my hands I’ll trust;

None about Caesar.

I'll trust only my own resolve and my own hands; I trust no one near Caesar.

I trust myself and my hands—that's all I need. No one around Caesar.

im trusting myself not caesars people

Why it matters [object Object]
ANTONY ≋ verse [dying with dignity and pride]

The miserable change now at my end

Lament nor sorrow at, but please your thoughts

In feeding them with those my former fortunes

Wherein I lived the greatest prince o’ th’ world,

The noblest; and do now not basely die,

Not cowardly put off my helmet to

My countryman; a Roman by a Roman

Valiantly vanquished. Now my spirit is going;

I can no more.

Don't mourn this miserable change at my end, but comfort yourself by remembering my former greatness when I was the greatest and noblest prince in the world. And I won't die shamefully or put off my crown to my countryman like a coward; a Roman defeated valiantly by a Roman. Now my spirit departs; I can say no more.

Don't cry over this terrible change as I die. Instead, remember the good days when I was the greatest and most noble ruler in the world. I'm not dying in shame or surrendering to another Roman like a coward—I'm going down to a Roman, fighting. Now I'm going; I have nothing left to say.

dont mourn me remember when i was greatest im dying valiantly to a roman im done

"A Roman by a Roman / Valiantly vanquished" Antony wants history to record that he fell to an equal (Caesar), not to shame. It's the last warrior's dignity—death in battle is acceptable; shameful captivity is not.
Why it matters [object Object]
CLEOPATRA ≋ verse [despairing, pleading him to live]

Noblest of men, woo’t die?

Hast thou no care of me? Shall I abide

In this dull world, which in thy absence is

No better than a sty? O, see, my women,

Most noble of men, will you die? Do you have no care for me? Am I to stay in this dull world which, without you, is no better than a pigsty?

Noblest of men, you're dying? Don't you care about me? Am I supposed to stay in this boring, empty world—which without you is just a pigsty?

ur dying no care for me ill be left in this empty world its nothing without u

[_ Antony dies._]
CLEOPATRA ≋ verse [devastated, lamenting his death]

The crown o’ th’ earth doth melt.—My lord!

O, withered is the garland of the war,

The soldier’s pole is fallen; young boys and girls

Are level now with men. The odds is gone,

And there is nothing left remarkable

Beneath the visiting moon.

The crown of the earth has melted away. My lord! The wreath of war is withered, the leader of soldiers has fallen. Now young boys and girls are equal to men. The advantage is gone, and there is nothing left remarkable in the world below the moon.

The greatest person on earth has melted away. My lord! The glory of war is shriveled, the great soldier-leader is gone. Now kids and grown men are all the same. The hierarchy is broken, and there's nothing special left in this world anymore.

crown of earth is gone. garland of war withered. soldier's pole fallen. young & old equal now. nothing remarkable left

[_Faints._]
CHARMIAN [trying to calm her mistress]

O, quietness, lady!

O, quietness, lady!

O, quietness, lady!

o, quietness, lady!

First appearance
IRAS

Iras speaks only in short, stricken exclamations, and her fear runs ahead of the facts: 'She is dead too, our sovereign.' Her 'Royal Egypt, Empress!' calls Cleopatra by her full titles, as if naming her rank could bring her back. Her few words show how completely the women's world depends on their queen.

IRAS [alarmed, fearing she's died]

She is dead too, our sovereign.

She is dead as well, our queen.

She's gone too, our sovereign.

shes dead too

CHARMIAN [crying out in panic]

Lady!

Lady!

Lady!

lady!

IRAS [frantic, calling to her]

Madam!

Madam!

Madam!

madam!

CHARMIAN [desperate to rouse her]

O madam, madam, madam!

O lady, lady, lady!

Oh madam, madam, madam!

oh no

IRAS [imploring her to wake]

Royal Egypt, Empress!

Royal Egypt, Empress!

Royal Egypt, Empress!

royal egypt, empress!

CHARMIAN [hushing Iras, spotting signs of life]

Peace, peace, Iras!

Peace, peace, Iras!

Peace, peace, Iras!

peace, peace, iras!

CLEOPATRA ≋ verse [humbled, steeling herself to act]

No more but e’en a woman, and commanded

By such poor passion as the maid that milks

And does the meanest chares. It were for me

To throw my sceptre at the injurious gods,

To tell them that this world did equal theirs

Till they had stolen our jewel. All’s but naught;

Patience is sottish, and impatience does

Become a dog that’s mad. Then is it sin

To rush into the secret house of death

Ere death dare come to us? How do you, women?

What, what! good cheer! Why, how now, Charmian?

My noble girls! Ah, women, women! Look,

Our lamp is spent, it’s out! Good sirs, take heart.

We’ll bury him; and then, what’s brave, what’s noble,

Let’s do it after the high Roman fashion

And make death proud to take us. Come, away.

This case of that huge spirit now is cold.

Ah, women, women! Come, we have no friend

But resolution and the briefest end.

I'm now just a woman, driven by the same cheap passions as a milkmaid doing her work. I should hurl my scepter at the cruel gods and tell them that this world was equal to theirs until they stole our jewel from us. Everything means nothing now. Patience is foolish and impatience makes you mad. Is it sinful to run to death's door before death comes to us? Women, hold up! Charmian, my noble girls! Look—our light is gone, it's out! My friends, be brave. We'll bury him, and then let's do something brave and noble in the grand Roman style and make death honored to take us. Come. The body of that great spirit is cold. Women, we have only one friend left—our will and a swift end.

I'm just a woman now, controlled by feelings as small as a milkmaid's. I want to throw my crown at those cruel gods and tell them this world was as good as theirs until they took our treasure. It all means nothing. Being patient is stupid and being impatient makes you crazy. Is it wrong to run toward death before death comes to you? Come on, women, stay strong! Charmian, my beautiful women! Look, our light is gone, it's out! Friends, be brave. We'll bury him. Then let's do something brave and noble the way Romans do it and make death feel honored to take us. Let's go. That great man's body is cold now. Women, we only have one thing—our strength and the swift end that waits for us.

im just a woman now small feelings like a milkmaid the world was good til gods stole u everything is nothing is it sin to run to death lets be brave roman style make death proud to take us we got only our will

Why it matters [object Object]
🎭 Dramatic irony Cleopatra resolves to die rather than be Caesar's prisoner. The audience will soon see Caesar's men capture her, briefly, before she manages her suicide.
[_Exeunt, bearing off Antony’s body._]

The Reckoning

The final scene of Act 4—Antony dies, the great soldier reduced to a need for kisses. Cleopatra learns too late that her lie killed him. She holds him as he dies, tells him his death was his own victory (only Antony conquered Antony), and when he's gone, she grieves not as a woman but as a kingdom. 'The soldier's pole is fallen.' She vows Caesar will never have her alive to parade. She will go to him as a woman choosing death, not a captive awaiting humiliation.

If this happened today…

A woman waits in a hospital room for the man she loves to arrive. When he does, he's already dying—a car crash an hour ago that she caused the circumstances for (told him to drive, left him a message that made him desperate). She holds his hand, his blood on her. His last words are: 'You didn't do this. I did.' Then he goes. She's alone. She knows what the next days mean: she'll be interrogated, maybe prosecuted, definitely exposed. She decides right then: she won't survive it as a victim. She'll leave on her own terms.

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